Guarding Me
Nonet Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I love the strong message conveyed in this Nonet. The flow of the poem was perfection and sounded like the natural flow of someone making a point.
The artwork, font style, the total color scheme ... draws the eyes in and gives strength to the written words.
Beautifully created!!
Best wishes in the contest :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I love the strong message conveyed in this Nonet. The flow of the poem was perfection and sounded like the natural flow of someone making a point.
The artwork, font style, the total color scheme ... draws the eyes in and gives strength to the written words.
Beautifully created!!
Best wishes in the contest :)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for this beautiful review! Your comments are lovely and quite humbling. I appreciate you taking the time to read this. Thanks again. Lynda
Comment from DragonSkulls
Wow, what a powerful nonet you have penned here, author. For some reason that seems beyond me, this is the most fitting picture you've chosen to go with it. Her solitude, I'm guessing. Excellent piece of poetry. Not many people can pull off a nonet and have each line smaller than the previous line. Perfect form as well. Great write. Best of luck in the voting. This one will hard to top. Keep up the great work.
DS
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Wow, what a powerful nonet you have penned here, author. For some reason that seems beyond me, this is the most fitting picture you've chosen to go with it. Her solitude, I'm guessing. Excellent piece of poetry. Not many people can pull off a nonet and have each line smaller than the previous line. Perfect form as well. Great write. Best of luck in the voting. This one will hard to top. Keep up the great work.
DS
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Holy cow! What a beautiful review. I love nonets but they can be difficult. But if it's not challenging why bother? I thank you for all of these lovely comments. It means a great deal to me, Mr. Skulls. Much appreciated.
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Any time.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The nonet form is not easy, but yours runs smoothly and has a message, a cleverly written nonet, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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The nonet form is not easy, but yours runs smoothly and has a message, a cleverly written nonet, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thanks Dolly. Your comments are greatly appreciated. Thanks for taking the time to read and review this. Means a lot!
Comment from LG Wolfe
This is powerful and poignant. Your first line is nearly courteous, but then you start listing the transgressions. The words gets more direct and tight as they travel down, to the last four lines, right to the point in the final line. Brilliant and it suits the structure of the poem well.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This is powerful and poignant. Your first line is nearly courteous, but then you start listing the transgressions. The words gets more direct and tight as they travel down, to the last four lines, right to the point in the final line. Brilliant and it suits the structure of the poem well.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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First of all welcome to Fanstory. You are doing well! I thank you for this detailed and awesome review of this nonet. They are stinkers but they are fun! Much appreciated.
Comment from Judy Swanson
An intriguing poem in a form that looks simple but can be difficult to write. I like the way each line seems to grow more defiant, more assertive, as it narrows and funnels into the final demanding "Mine." An enjoyable and thought-provoking read. Judy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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An intriguing poem in a form that looks simple but can be difficult to write. I like the way each line seems to grow more defiant, more assertive, as it narrows and funnels into the final demanding "Mine." An enjoyable and thought-provoking read. Judy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for lovely review. I love nonets. Very challenging. I'm glad you liked this one. Much appreciated!
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You are welcome. It was a pleasure.
