Promise of spring.
Poem3 total reviews
Comment from Connie Frazier
I love this. Your imagery is so vivid that I can see, hear, and feel the environment that you describe. You rhymes work well together. Very nicely written.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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I love this. Your imagery is so vivid that I can see, hear, and feel the environment that you describe. You rhymes work well together. Very nicely written.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review and shiny stars. Cheers, j
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting write for spring Jude and I enjoyed the magic of your words, just one suggestion in the last line, just to help the meter, 'warm this (chilling) heart' might work better, good luck with the the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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This is an uplifting write for spring Jude and I enjoyed the magic of your words, just one suggestion in the last line, just to help the meter, 'warm this (chilling) heart' might work better, good luck with the the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the review and advice. I agree and fixed that one, cheers, j
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You are always welcome Jude, love Dolly x
Comment from Sally Law
Beautiful rhyming poetry and the photo art is just breathtaking. I think just about everyone is in this contest and your offering made it ever more competitive.
All my best to you and in the contest,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Beautiful rhyming poetry and the photo art is just breathtaking. I think just about everyone is in this contest and your offering made it ever more competitive.
All my best to you and in the contest,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thanks Sally for the encouraging review.