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Grabby O'Greed

personification of greed

8 total reviews 
Comment from Michele Harber
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This poem is a very cute and enjoyable read, but with a very serious message. I agree totally that love is the greatest treasure, and the only one you CAN take with you, as it's the one that will keep you alive in people's memories. Your poem reads smoothly and rhymes well, and you did an excellent job of personifying the emotion. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you so very much.
reply by Michele Harber on 01-Apr-2019
    You're very welcome.
Comment from JudyE
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This is a clever way of reminding us all that we can't take our treasures with us when we're called up yonder. I think it may come as a shock to some who keep hoarding their riches. I enjoyed your poem thanks and can't think of any way to improve it.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it.
Comment from tfawcus
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I was drawn in by the title! It's a winner. A poem that has a definite moral but one that is delivered with a light enough touch to be easily digestible. Perfect rhyme and meter.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you so very much.
Comment from Cybertron1986
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Very well done. You've captured all the elements that was asked of the prompt and turned it into an appealing and creative expression that had a pleasant rhythm to it. Very well done and presented

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you! Win or lose in the contest your stars have made my day. I'm glad you enjoyed my work.
Comment from Randa Dayle
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Hello Grabby O'Greed! I think I may of met you before. Very nice poem for the personification of an emotion poem. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you so very much.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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You could not have chosen a better piece of artwork for this delightful poem.
I love 'Grabby O'Greed,' and you have certainly made her come alive.
I especially love how you started off with 1) the wooing of someone to greed; a human's justification for greed; and 3) the clear message that you can't take it with you.
Very creative and well done!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you for taking the time to leave this lovely review. I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Contest Author,

This is a great write, my friend. It is so true and, oddly, it seems the more money and "stuff" people have, the more obsessed they become to get even more. I don't understand ...

Nothing for me to suggest revising here.

Thanks for sharing and good luck.

Jan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank You.
Comment from Vicki Vartanian
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I liked it,Although a little dark it showed how a lot of people are these days with the grid and wanting so much. More than we can possibly use. Grabby o greed You could've possibly turn that into a more Eloquent phrase, With more power in your voice.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you for the comments and suggestion. I'm so glad you liked this poem.