Secrets of Distant Summer Thunder
Backyard observations and revelations...10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
I guess it was about thunder and lightning. Other than that I have no idea. You did a great job of picking some nonsensical words that are hard to figure out. What was the rest of it about?
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I guess it was about thunder and lightning. Other than that I have no idea. You did a great job of picking some nonsensical words that are hard to figure out. What was the rest of it about?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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It's really not about anything real except whatever you conjur in your head in your backyard when you read those words -- LOL! ;) ;) I think 'out in the yard' was really the only 'anchor' to this one! ;) ;) Thanx for dropping in for the review, sir! ;) ;)
Comment from Ross E Silke
This is really interesting and creative and tells a calming story of lots of green and creature-like images. It brings the reader into a scene of pleasant imagery. The words you use to try and sound out is fun. It's intellectual and witty with a sense of humour and adventure. A very creative and colourful poem. I like the picture to match the presentation and colours of the poem as well, and the font and font size are fitting. Excellent!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This is really interesting and creative and tells a calming story of lots of green and creature-like images. It brings the reader into a scene of pleasant imagery. The words you use to try and sound out is fun. It's intellectual and witty with a sense of humour and adventure. A very creative and colourful poem. I like the picture to match the presentation and colours of the poem as well, and the font and font size are fitting. Excellent!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your review, Ross! ;) :)
Comment from Randa Dayle
Hee hee ha ha! I love it! I am so happy that you choose to participate and show this very creative side of your writing. What a fun contest! Good luck always!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Hee hee ha ha! I love it! I am so happy that you choose to participate and show this very creative side of your writing. What a fun contest! Good luck always!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for those beautiful stars, Randa -- I'm really glad you enjoyed the backyard gibberish! Thanx for sponsoring the contest! :) ;)
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Thank you for the lovely stars, Randa -- glad you enjoyed the backyard gibberish. :) Thank you for sponsoring the contest! :) ;)
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well I think you met the criteria for nonsense. I'm glad I looked to see what type of poem or I would have been completely lost. =} Really great work, very clever at making up words. I am always making up words. Hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Well I think you met the criteria for nonsense. I'm glad I looked to see what type of poem or I would have been completely lost. =} Really great work, very clever at making up words. I am always making up words. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review, Roxanna -- make-believe isn't just for Mr. Rogers anymore! :)
Comment from Colin John
I must be going mad as i understood the words completely lol. Need a cup of tea urgently or I have been on here too long today.
Jokes apart , It did not make any sense and the picture made it worse.
So brilliant,well done. Kind Regards John
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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I must be going mad as i understood the words completely lol. Need a cup of tea urgently or I have been on here too long today.
Jokes apart , It did not make any sense and the picture made it worse.
So brilliant,well done. Kind Regards John
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review, John -- enjoy your tea! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well you fulfilled the brief here with your nonsensical poem, perhaps the trees and the animals have their own language here, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Well you fulfilled the brief here with your nonsensical poem, perhaps the trees and the animals have their own language here, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review, Dolly! :)
Comment from LisaMay
I love your offering to the nonsense poem contest. But it makes perfect sense to me! I adore your poem's title and all the activity contained in the poem, its colour and sound are vivid. It is almost like an old Norse fairytale story.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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I love your offering to the nonsense poem contest. But it makes perfect sense to me! I adore your poem's title and all the activity contained in the poem, its colour and sound are vivid. It is almost like an old Norse fairytale story.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review, LisaMay -- I had hoped it would 'read sensibly'! :)
Comment from A Little Bird
Haha! Loved this! I read through the poem and was thinking to myself 'I can't believe there are so many words in the English language I don't know... I can't understand this piece at all; that's embarrassing.' Then I read the Writing Prompt competition rules and it all made sense!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Haha! Loved this! I read through the poem and was thinking to myself 'I can't believe there are so many words in the English language I don't know... I can't understand this piece at all; that's embarrassing.' Then I read the Writing Prompt competition rules and it all made sense!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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That is funny, Abby -- glad to keep you on your toes today! :) Thank you for the review! :)
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your Nonsense poem entry is wonderful! I love the face in the Elm tree and the animals make it so enchanting! Your well-written verses make your poem easy to follow and clear. Also I found your verse, "'Midst ehrshuls found in thunder's peal" excellent!
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
Your Nonsense poem entry is wonderful! I love the face in the Elm tree and the animals make it so enchanting! Your well-written verses make your poem easy to follow and clear. Also I found your verse, "'Midst ehrshuls found in thunder's peal" excellent!
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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So glad you enjoyed, Deborah -- thank you for the review! :)
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You are welcome!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! This is a great contest entry for the nonsense verse competition. It is very well written and your visual presentation is excellent and complements your verse perfectly. Where did you find that great image? Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Jan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! This is a great contest entry for the nonsense verse competition. It is very well written and your visual presentation is excellent and complements your verse perfectly. Where did you find that great image? Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Jan
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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So glad you enjoyed, Jan -- thank you for the review! :)
