Nana Time
Memories in the making9 total reviews
Comment from diamondbogle
I love this. It's so sweet. I miss spending time with my grandma. This makes me want to call her and tell her how much I love her. Very well written. I loved it.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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I love this. It's so sweet. I miss spending time with my grandma. This makes me want to call her and tell her how much I love her. Very well written. I loved it.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you:) I glad you like it.
Comment from poetwatch
Nana is that special person that you still see in your heart, Author. I feel good when I read a poem where your love shows you care. Many grandparents are forgotten they sit in nursing homes or at their homes all alone. Children don't think that one day they will be there. This is a good entry for the Child's time with a Grandparent.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Nana is that special person that you still see in your heart, Author. I feel good when I read a poem where your love shows you care. Many grandparents are forgotten they sit in nursing homes or at their homes all alone. Children don't think that one day they will be there. This is a good entry for the Child's time with a Grandparent.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate both:)
Comment from LisaMay
This is a lovely poem, depicting the simply expressed pleasures to be found in little moments of together-time. Your touches of humour are fun. I do hope the child gets around to telling Nana how her hugs and visits are enjoyed.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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This is a lovely poem, depicting the simply expressed pleasures to be found in little moments of together-time. Your touches of humour are fun. I do hope the child gets around to telling Nana how her hugs and visits are enjoyed.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing _ I appreciate both :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Awwww, this is a sweet poem about a grandma and grand child playing soccer together. Grandma sounds like a lively, fun loving lady. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Awwww, this is a sweet poem about a grandma and grand child playing soccer together. Grandma sounds like a lively, fun loving lady. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reading, reviewing, and the stars:)
Comment from Randa Dayle
Yes Nana's laugh as they run. What a wonderful example of a child's memory with grandma. I think you have done an excellent poem with that writing prompt!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Yes Nana's laugh as they run. What a wonderful example of a child's memory with grandma. I think you have done an excellent poem with that writing prompt!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing:)
Comment from Judy Swanson
I can hear the child's voice clearly in your poem. First the excitement that "Nana is coming over today." And then the apparent memory of Nana asking for soccer lessons so she can impress her friends (I've told that little fib to my own little ones...), and the child's questioning Nana's abilities; and then expanding the thought chain to simple joy in Nana's presence and her hugs.
Judy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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I can hear the child's voice clearly in your poem. First the excitement that "Nana is coming over today." And then the apparent memory of Nana asking for soccer lessons so she can impress her friends (I've told that little fib to my own little ones...), and the child's questioning Nana's abilities; and then expanding the thought chain to simple joy in Nana's presence and her hugs.
Judy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, and hearing:)
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You are welcome. It was fun. Judy
Comment from kiwijenny
I am going to Florida today to be with my darling nine month grandson...there is something so wonderful about being a granny..I inserted Granny is coming over today and did a happy dance
God bless and have a blessed day
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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I am going to Florida today to be with my darling nine month grandson...there is something so wonderful about being a granny..I inserted Granny is coming over today and did a happy dance
God bless and have a blessed day
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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I'm dancing with you!!
First for sharing in the Nana/Granny club, and secondly for your gift of the 6th star:)
Being a mom was my most important job--to be surpassed by being a grandmother!!!
Enjoy, and thank you, again.
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Me too me too
Comment from JudyE
What a great poem and this sounds so much like a child's thoughts. Love the idea of the child teaching grandma his 'moves' and causing her to laugh so much she can't run. It's magic. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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What a great poem and this sounds so much like a child's thoughts. Love the idea of the child teaching grandma his 'moves' and causing her to laugh so much she can't run. It's magic. Best of luck.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words and stars:)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write. The tone is perfect for a child waiting for their grandparent to come over and the excitement they feel for that. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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This was a good write. The tone is perfect for a child waiting for their grandparent to come over and the excitement they feel for that. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reading and for the stars:)