Competition Over Self Achievement
One Line Contest Entry6 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is too funny because I find myself doing this all the time, and then admonishing myself for doing so. I could not have said it better.
Perfect artwork to accompany this brilliant one-liner.
The title, too, says it all.
Excellent contest entry!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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This is too funny because I find myself doing this all the time, and then admonishing myself for doing so. I could not have said it better.
Perfect artwork to accompany this brilliant one-liner.
The title, too, says it all.
Excellent contest entry!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Gale. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great night.
Ron
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I thought it truly brilliant in all aspects :)
Comment from LyndaS
LOL! Well geez, what can I say to that? Too damn funny. It looks so elegant and then you read what you wrote and hit a speed bump. This was great. And also gives you pause. Good luck author in your contest. Again, too damn funny. Lynda
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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LOL! Well geez, what can I say to that? Too damn funny. It looks so elegant and then you read what you wrote and hit a speed bump. This was great. And also gives you pause. Good luck author in your contest. Again, too damn funny. Lynda
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Lynda. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. I was just in one of those moods, lol. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Mark D. R.
There are many good entries for this one-liner, but yiur twist is the funniest! Great choice of an illustrstion to accompany your verse.
Good luck
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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There are many good entries for this one-liner, but yiur twist is the funniest! Great choice of an illustrstion to accompany your verse.
Good luck
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Mark. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from LisaMay
Hah, so easily distracted! But oh so human and such a common problem to prioritise the trivial. Good luck with making a start on your masterpiece tomorrow.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Hah, so easily distracted! But oh so human and such a common problem to prioritise the trivial. Good luck with making a start on your masterpiece tomorrow.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Lisa. Yeah, the masterpiece always gets put on hold, haha. I appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. Have a great day.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the image and
your monostich!
-I like how you tie in
the first half to the title
and the artwork.
-Then, you have a good
twist in the second half
about the "dumb contest."
-Good luck with your
masterful monostich!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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-I love the image and
your monostich!
-I like how you tie in
the first half to the title
and the artwork.
-Then, you have a good
twist in the second half
about the "dumb contest."
-Good luck with your
masterful monostich!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Pam. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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You are welcome. I do enjoy silliness. It makes things better at times.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! I love this poem. And I know the feeling. I have been resisting the contest draw of late, personally. Nicely written with a great complentary image. LOL
Good luck and thanks for the laugh.
Jan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! I love this poem. And I know the feeling. I have been resisting the contest draw of late, personally. Nicely written with a great complentary image. LOL
Good luck and thanks for the laugh.
Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Jan. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
