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Viewing comments for Chapter 200 "The Rainbow Path"Eclectic mix
6 total reviews
Comment from Ross E Silke
It is a hot topic and issue in our society that does get a lot of onlookers at times as it simply isn't the norm from back in the 20th century. Our church and culture and moral views seems to cast it out making it difficult to discern if it should be accepted or not. Your poem reads well and shows all the emotions of the issue at hand. It flows together well and reads nicely. The love between the two can be felt as a reflection of the intimacy they have for one another that maybe is expressed too much in their relationship due to lack of understanding the same sex; same-sex attraction seems common in our society but I think it can be harnassed and re-evaluated by the people to maybe form an intimate friendship than lovers which seems to cause problems down the road. That's my take on the issue. But the poem is truthful and you can feel the emotions as its written quite well, intelligently, and properly formatted. Best,
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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It is a hot topic and issue in our society that does get a lot of onlookers at times as it simply isn't the norm from back in the 20th century. Our church and culture and moral views seems to cast it out making it difficult to discern if it should be accepted or not. Your poem reads well and shows all the emotions of the issue at hand. It flows together well and reads nicely. The love between the two can be felt as a reflection of the intimacy they have for one another that maybe is expressed too much in their relationship due to lack of understanding the same sex; same-sex attraction seems common in our society but I think it can be harnassed and re-evaluated by the people to maybe form an intimate friendship than lovers which seems to cause problems down the road. That's my take on the issue. But the poem is truthful and you can feel the emotions as its written quite well, intelligently, and properly formatted. Best,
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much Ross for your in depth review. Im sorry to take so long replying. I reallly appreciated your views. Same sex relationships have a plethora of reactions with which to deal. I?m so glad emotion came through in my penning. Thank you again for taking the time to read and review my poetry
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Bucket,
This is a timely write, in my opinion. Why are so many heteros so threatened by those who are different? I have never understood this perspective. They act as if being gay is some sort of a contagious disease. So much hatred and violence towards people ho are different, often from "Godly" people. Pfffft.
I prefer to celebrate diversity in all forms. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Hi Bucket,
This is a timely write, in my opinion. Why are so many heteros so threatened by those who are different? I have never understood this perspective. They act as if being gay is some sort of a contagious disease. So much hatred and violence towards people ho are different, often from "Godly" people. Pfffft.
I prefer to celebrate diversity in all forms. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a difficult subject and it does seem odd to see same sex coupled showing affection for each other in public places, but we have to accept this because it has existed since the beginning of time and still the majority, including myself find it odd to see. A poignant write Trisha, food for thought and a fine pantoum here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This is a difficult subject and it does seem odd to see same sex coupled showing affection for each other in public places, but we have to accept this because it has existed since the beginning of time and still the majority, including myself find it odd to see. A poignant write Trisha, food for thought and a fine pantoum here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you Dolly, your endorsement of my pantoum poem leaves me honored. I have long since found a trend for sexual behavior to be expressed in lyric form
through to downright obscenity in the media exposure to our children. Sexual preference does not make the , person, but place of expressing it shouldn?t be public.
Thanks so much for your review
Hugs. Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A well penned Pantoum poem Trish about the rainbow path that some walk through, and their right to do so. I agree with your author notes, maybe it's my age, but I think not in public, but some that do, I feel are making a statement of their own whether it be same sex relations or hetro. Anyway, to get back to t, I thought your repeating lines worked well in this Pantoum, well done.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A well penned Pantoum poem Trish about the rainbow path that some walk through, and their right to do so. I agree with your author notes, maybe it's my age, but I think not in public, but some that do, I feel are making a statement of their own whether it be same sex relations or hetro. Anyway, to get back to t, I thought your repeating lines worked well in this Pantoum, well done.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Valda. Your review was very positive about a controversial subject. I am glad you enjoyed the poem, as this style drove me NUTS, ha ha!
Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from diamondbogle
Yo this was really cool. I like the way this was written. It had imagery but yet I kinda went off with it. I also liked how it flowed really nicely. Overall really well done.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Yo this was really cool. I like the way this was written. It had imagery but yet I kinda went off with it. I also liked how it flowed really nicely. Overall really well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Badger_29
I gave this one 6 because of your originality of the way you worded it together with it juxtaposition in the meetings very enjoyable reading and a great commentary on the State of Affairs that made people share as they go through life. Loved the title to very clever.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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I gave this one 6 because of your originality of the way you worded it together with it juxtaposition in the meetings very enjoyable reading and a great commentary on the State of Affairs that made people share as they go through life. Loved the title to very clever.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A very controversial subject for which I have no problem. Same sex choice does not make the whole person. But overt displays of sexual nature are for the private places not public, in my opinion. Thanks for reading and super reviewing, we should not hate anyone.
Hugs, Trisha
