Let the Music Speak for Us
Don't worry, we'll work it out...we always do18 total reviews
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Outstanding contest entry and poem! I could imagine hot tea poured over ice cubes and feet resting from high heels! This well-deserved relaxation after a workday is due and enjoyed. Excellent word choice and writing!
My best, Deborah
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
Outstanding contest entry and poem! I could imagine hot tea poured over ice cubes and feet resting from high heels! This well-deserved relaxation after a workday is due and enjoyed. Excellent word choice and writing!
My best, Deborah
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Deborah -- I am so glad you enjoyed! :)
Comment from Lordinajamjar
Roll over Beethoven the anonymous poet.
A very nice poem. Just chillin' on their own. An alcoholic drink, listening to a classic Beethoven.
She should have pleaded the fifth.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Roll over Beethoven the anonymous poet.
A very nice poem. Just chillin' on their own. An alcoholic drink, listening to a classic Beethoven.
She should have pleaded the fifth.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, John -- I am so glad you enjoyed! :)
Comment from RodG
Hi author. I truly enjoyed your "Even-the-odds" entry because of how you personalized the role Beethoven plays in this working mom's life. Easy to visualiize the whole scene as she kicks off the heels, pours tea into a glass with ice cubes, and lastly turns on the music. Rod
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Hi author. I truly enjoyed your "Even-the-odds" entry because of how you personalized the role Beethoven plays in this working mom's life. Easy to visualiize the whole scene as she kicks off the heels, pours tea into a glass with ice cubes, and lastly turns on the music. Rod
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful comments, Rod -- brought a much needed smile this evening! :)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. It also seems like it would be a perfect time at the end of a busy day. Nice and relaxing before the next inevitable storm comes along. Nice job.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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This was a good read. It also seems like it would be a perfect time at the end of a busy day. Nice and relaxing before the next inevitable storm comes along. Nice job.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful review, Chas -- have a great evening! :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count
and synonyms are good.
-You have a very good
poem, full of effective
imagery that creates a
vivid word picture of
relaxing after a hard day at work.
-I like the "iced tea" line, and
the ending lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count
and synonyms are good.
-You have a very good
poem, full of effective
imagery that creates a
vivid word picture of
relaxing after a hard day at work.
-I like the "iced tea" line, and
the ending lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for these lovely comments, Pam -- put a smile here after a long day! :) ;) Take care! :)
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You are very welcome and I am glad it brought a 🙂
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a super write and a great use of classical music! An everyday-type, realistic scenario. Nothing to revise here. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a super write and a great use of classical music! An everyday-type, realistic scenario. Nothing to revise here. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for these lovely comments, Jan -- put a smile here after a long day! :) ;) Take care! :)
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Awww - I'm glad you found my review helpful. I hope you kicked back and enjoyed the great master's music, just like in your release. Jan :-)
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your orchestra is in fine tune. Your words flow together in a coherent story.
Cute how you made your first and last line identical. But if you really want to relax, you may want to consider adding something a bit stronger to your verse. 'Cider' works for your same syllable count, but maybe that's not your preferred drink over the rocks. LOL
Here is a puzzle equal to your math lines.
Move only one of the three horizontal lines (imagine they are stacked one on top of the other - I can't create that text image here) to form an equation that is equal on both sides.
two one five zero - - - 101010
Hint: Americans may have a harder time solving this than Europeans.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Your orchestra is in fine tune. Your words flow together in a coherent story.
Cute how you made your first and last line identical. But if you really want to relax, you may want to consider adding something a bit stronger to your verse. 'Cider' works for your same syllable count, but maybe that's not your preferred drink over the rocks. LOL
Here is a puzzle equal to your math lines.
Move only one of the three horizontal lines (imagine they are stacked one on top of the other - I can't create that text image here) to form an equation that is equal on both sides.
two one five zero - - - 101010
Hint: Americans may have a harder time solving this than Europeans.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thanx so much for the awesome review, Mark -- always good to hear from you! :) ;) I used to save the cider for late at night after the boys were in bed! :) ;)
WRT the riddle...I'm sure I don't understand what you're saying to do... ? :( I tried but I don't follow... ? Sorry...? Thanx again, sir, and have a great weekend! ;)
Comment from kiwijenny
We have to do something about the editor gnome...gnome what I'm saying....I digress
This is an awesome poem...love the iced tea...as I am a teetotaler myself....awesome idea...throw a handful of Epsom salts into the mix to relax those sore feet
God bless. I enjoyed it
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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We have to do something about the editor gnome...gnome what I'm saying....I digress
This is an awesome poem...love the iced tea...as I am a teetotaler myself....awesome idea...throw a handful of Epsom salts into the mix to relax those sore feet
God bless. I enjoyed it
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Yeah, what is with that little guy, huh? :) ;) LOL! :) Thank you so very much for these lovely comments, Jenny -- put a smile here after a long day! :) ;) Take care! :)
