Comment from
tfawcus
A macabre poem created from this three word challenge. Consistent abcb rhyming and good rhythmic flow give this poem something of the feel of a ballad.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
Thank you for the excellent rating, tfawcus. Good ear for noting the ballad feel. I appreciate your well-balanced review.