Cherry Snow Storm
When the snow isn't cold at all...12 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, mystery writer. Oh, yes, this is a lovely entry for the 3-5-7. What a pretty sight that must have been, petals of snow. Love it! Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Hello there, mystery writer. Oh, yes, this is a lovely entry for the 3-5-7. What a pretty sight that must have been, petals of snow. Love it! Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I'm so very glad you enjoyed my 'snow storm', Kerry -- I was pleased to share it with everyone....the side yard of my house is just PINK! :) ;) Thanx again for the review! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a sweet write and I would accept a blizzard of perfumed petals any day, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes . . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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This is such a sweet write and I would accept a blizzard of perfumed petals any day, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes . . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my 'snow storm' Dolly -- thanx for the review! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Dean Kuch
I had the pleasure of walking along the National Mall in Washington, D.C. during a time when the cherry blossoms were falling and flying on either side.
It looked like a gigantic pink blizzard--a gorgeous sight to see!
Having said that, I can easily relate to what you've written in your 3-5-7 entry for the contest.
Well penned, best of luck!
~Dean
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I had the pleasure of walking along the National Mall in Washington, D.C. during a time when the cherry blossoms were falling and flying on either side.
It looked like a gigantic pink blizzard--a gorgeous sight to see!
Having said that, I can easily relate to what you've written in your 3-5-7 entry for the contest.
Well penned, best of luck!
~Dean
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review on my 'snow storm', Sir Dean -- you're right, though, they really are gorgeous! ;) Hope you're recovery's about done and you're nearly 100% again! :) ;) Take care! :) Yvette
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Anytime.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, how incredibly beautiful! Your presentation is spectacular, but even without it, the words of your lovely 3-5-7 poem evoke the most glorious imagery. It is so easy to picture that "petal snow". Our cherry blossoms aren't far away either, and I can hardly wait!
Best of luck in the booth with this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Oh, how incredibly beautiful! Your presentation is spectacular, but even without it, the words of your lovely 3-5-7 poem evoke the most glorious imagery. It is so easy to picture that "petal snow". Our cherry blossoms aren't far away either, and I can hardly wait!
Best of luck in the booth with this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Dawn -- I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!! :) ;) Long story, but the trees are one of the few things about this place that make me smile!! :) ;) Take care! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-7 poem and a very pleasant snowstorm indeed. The cherry blossoms from the trees smells great and it is not as cold as real snow for a great treat.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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A very well-written 3-5-7 poem and a very pleasant snowstorm indeed. The cherry blossoms from the trees smells great and it is not as cold as real snow for a great treat.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Sandra! :) Have a great evening!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed your petal snow and I imaged its fragrance! Lovely picture and lovely poem. Your verses are bright an clever!
My best in your contest entry,
Deborah
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your petal snow and I imaged its fragrance! Lovely picture and lovely poem. Your verses are bright an clever!
My best in your contest entry,
Deborah
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Deborah! :) Have a great evening!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful image and
nice presentation.
-Thanks for your notes.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is vivid and
creates a good word picture.
-Effective use of alliteration
to enhance the imagery.
-The phrase "petal snow" is
very creative, and the ending
is also good with "Spring's blizzard."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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-Beautiful image and
nice presentation.
-Thanks for your notes.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is vivid and
creates a good word picture.
-Effective use of alliteration
to enhance the imagery.
-The phrase "petal snow" is
very creative, and the ending
is also good with "Spring's blizzard."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for this lovely review, Pam -- much appreciated coming from you! :)
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You are very welcome, and thanks for your kind reply. I will wait to see who you are!
Comment from JudyE
Cherry blossom is just so pretty although most fruit trees have pretty blossoms. I can't improve on your poem. Good luck in the competition. This deserves to do well.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Cherry blossom is just so pretty although most fruit trees have pretty blossoms. I can't improve on your poem. Good luck in the competition. This deserves to do well.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review, Judy -- much appreciated! :)
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
This cherry snow storm is spectacular! The words are amazing... Spring's sweet surrogate blizzard. The alliteration is great and they justify the picture. Perfect.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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This cherry snow storm is spectacular! The words are amazing... Spring's sweet surrogate blizzard. The alliteration is great and they justify the picture. Perfect.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review, Sandra -- always appreciated! :)
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You're welcome!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
WOW! This is stunningly gorgeous, both in verse and visual presentation. I've never had the pleasure of experiencing this and likely never will, but it sure sounds heavenly. A nice reward for making it through the winter for sure. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
WOW! This is stunningly gorgeous, both in verse and visual presentation. I've never had the pleasure of experiencing this and likely never will, but it sure sounds heavenly. A nice reward for making it through the winter for sure. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review, Jan -- always appreciated! :)
