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Create AD COPY contest entry

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Comment from Gloria ....
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I am so loving this contest. What a fine entry you have here. I'm holding out for Venus rather than the moon though.

Terrific job with your ad and billboard. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the great review, Gloria. I was going to add something about having property on Venus near the end there but had to go to bed to do this thing called life, so I didn't get that in there. lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from LisaMay
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Are there any houseboat moorings left on the Sea of Tranquility? I could be interested in a cheaper leaky boat option as there aint no water there that I know of.
Good spoof, although sadly coming true.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Yeah, water costs a few thousand as well. Living on the moon ain't cheap. Lol. Thank you for the great review, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great night or day, whatever it is there. Ha

    Ron
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Sign me up, Ron, I'm outta here, heh-heh!
What a light show that would be, huh? Watching ICBM Nuclear missiles tracking to their doomed targets across Earth's stratosphere until they exploded.
And all from the comfort of your state-of-the-art lunaminium's Moon Room.
Sure, luxuries like breathing are gonna be costly. $16,000.00 every two months for oxygen? That averages out to be $8,000.00 a month which translates to $96,000.00 per year just for oxygen alone!
Anyhow, I'd figure something out.
Funny stuff, my man, very well done and professional looking.
Best of luck to you in the contest, my friend.
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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Haha. Topped it off with a spaceman floating by. Awesome. Yeah, I figure if they can afford one of our multi million dollar moon homes, 8 thou a month for air wouldn't be too unreasonable. Lol. I really appreciate the great review and stars, friend. I'm glad you liked my silly offering. Have a good one, D.

    Ron
reply by Dean Kuch on 26-Mar-2019
    You're welcome, Ron.
    Good luck!
Comment from 24chas
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I really enjoyed this, Dragonskulls. It was very creative and I loved all the benefits you would get by moving to the moon. I'm assuming it would be cheaper on the dark side of the moon. Nice job.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the great review, 24. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Artasylum
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Cool great job
DRAGONSKULLS I have written ads and entertainment ad copy for twenty years and this is an excellent entry for the contest... I'm enjoying this contest... good luck... yours, diana

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much for the excellent review, Diana. I've always figured I'd like to go that route for a career, designing billboards and things. I took Graphic Arts way back in high school but that just turned out to be printing, not the design aspect of it. The big problem is, I don't know how to get into it. I actually think I'd be pretty good at it but don't have a clue as to where to start. Might you have any suggestions? Any advice would be greatly appreciated. I'd love to give it a go, but again, don't know where to go to even get started.

    Thank you for the excellent review and gracious stars, Diana. I'm glad you liked the piece. If you have any advice, I'll listen. Have a great day. Thank you again.

    Ron
Comment from Gail Denham
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Silliness with just the tiniest hint of truth that many believe is coming. And fear. Good job and funny. Frankly I never liked any space movie, and hated 2001 Movie. The thought of food coming in little pills gives me nightmares - and how to they go to the bathroom in space? Always the first question.

Good job with your spoof. I pray we won't be around to see someone push that button, altho right now it's apt to be buried under congress's desks, as they argue back and forth endlessly. I pray to be heading to heaven to be with my Saviour, Jesus Christ.
We sure do have a bargain with fresh air - beings it goes for $l6,000. 00 per month up there.
Enjoyed your poem.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Yes, I sure hope I'm heaven bound before this come about, that's for sure. 16 thou was for two months. That's only a tiny 8 thousand a month for air. Haha. If they're rich enough for a condo on the moon, they have plenty to spend on their air. I'm sure it won't be cheap. Thank you for the great review, Gail. Have a wonderful day.

    Ron
Comment from LyndaS
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OMG!!! This is hilarious and so very clever. The picture you created just sent me into fits of laughter. Love the whole concept of the sales pitch to buy now or you basically die on earth in a ball of hellfire. Ha! Also the eclipse reference was priceless. There is soooo much to here to enjoy. Really, really well done. Too funny! I loved this. Good luck in your contest Mr. Skulls.

One fix.. Just imagine,

Other than that, thank you for a Monday afternoon gigglefest.. Lynda

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Wow, thank you so much for the awesome review and big six, Lynda. I fixed the goof. Thank you for catching that as well. Just imaging, lol. Jeez. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, L. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again. Have a wonderful day.

    Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, I laughed my socks off at this add and I would like you to sign me up, I shall enjoy the free gravity boots! Send me ticket now! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the fantastic review and good luck wishes, Dolly. Tickets are on there way, lol. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great day.

    Ron
Comment from kiwijenny
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I bet you're over the moon about how this turned out...wait over the moon...that phrase will have to go.. and instead of full moon you'll have full earth... yikes it's a tad expensive...but there's a bouncy house for the kids so all is good...
God bless

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Haha. I might have to add that in there, Full Earth. That's great. Thank you so much for the humorous review, Jenny. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from royowen
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Well done with this great entry in this very quirky contest, (I wouldn't know the fist thing about how to go about it, the billboard is brilliant) you've lain out the perfect ad with all the comical but salient points that a real ad is likely to be. Excellent job, good luck, blessjngs, Roy

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review, Roy. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Blessings to you too, my friend.

    Ron
reply by royowen on 26-Mar-2019
    Well done