Cracked
One of us is9 total reviews
Comment from JudyE
I love this but I'm having difficulty working out which one is cracked (laugh). I hope you do well in the contest and I don't have any suggestions that would improve it.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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I love this but I'm having difficulty working out which one is cracked (laugh). I hope you do well in the contest and I don't have any suggestions that would improve it.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you Judy. ;)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Wa ha ha ha! This is great. Really funny. And a great contest entry, my friend. Nothing here for me to suggest improving upon. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Wa ha ha ha! This is great. Really funny. And a great contest entry, my friend. Nothing here for me to suggest improving upon. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you Muse. Much appreciated. :)
Comment from LisaMay
I actually think that both of you are! You should know by now not to look in a mirror, because what looks back at you is always laughable. This poem cracked me up.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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I actually think that both of you are! You should know by now not to look in a mirror, because what looks back at you is always laughable. This poem cracked me up.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Hahaha
Aren't we all half cracked anyway?
Glad I made you laugh. Thanks for a great review.
Best
John
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Yep, cracked and crazed.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, well they say it's seven years bad luck if the mirror has a crack, but my mirror is showing wrinkles that look like cracks, so I think it is me that's cracked, a fun poem, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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He he he, well they say it's seven years bad luck if the mirror has a crack, but my mirror is showing wrinkles that look like cracks, so I think it is me that's cracked, a fun poem, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Dolly I am delighted to have made you laugh. :)
HaHa We are all half-cracked.
Thank you.
Best
Comment from Poetic Friend
In its brevity, this poem is brilliant. I LOVE that second line. The cat must be quite confused.
Cats usually avoid looking directly in the mirror.
Gotta love this one. Good look in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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In its brevity, this poem is brilliant. I LOVE that second line. The cat must be quite confused.
Cats usually avoid looking directly in the mirror.
Gotta love this one. Good look in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks Poetic Friend. Making you laugh makes me happy.
Comment from Artasylum
You had me at kitty cat... I love him and his mirror is just jealous of his perfection... thanks so much great imagery, and the colors were strong... good work overall... yours, diana
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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You had me at kitty cat... I love him and his mirror is just jealous of his perfection... thanks so much great imagery, and the colors were strong... good work overall... yours, diana
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thank you Diana. Cats and laughter go hand in paw. Glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Njorgensen
Hahahaha! Love it! I think this is a great interpretation of the poem requirements for this contest. I think the other entries might be in trouble!
Nancy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Hahahaha! Love it! I think this is a great interpretation of the poem requirements for this contest. I think the other entries might be in trouble!
Nancy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thank you Nancy. ;)
So glad I made you laugh
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and I like your poem!
-Good humor appeals to me.
-I like the mirror's response
to your laughing at it!
-I also like the play on
words with "cracked" at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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-Good image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and I like your poem!
-Good humor appeals to me.
-I like the mirror's response
to your laughing at it!
-I also like the play on
words with "cracked" at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thank you Pam for a wonderful review.
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You are very welcome. I liked your entry!
Comment from kiwijenny
He he he he ,, I know that's right...so those winkles aren't true...it's the mirror who's cracking up. I'll buy that...and what about the hair on the chin...to my chagrin...I beat the mirror's at fault for that too...
lol
Great job
God bless
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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He he he he ,, I know that's right...so those winkles aren't true...it's the mirror who's cracking up. I'll buy that...and what about the hair on the chin...to my chagrin...I beat the mirror's at fault for that too...
lol
Great job
God bless
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks Jenny
Want to know the secret to youth? Smash every damn mirror you own.
LOL