Truth Teller
Mirrors do not lie4 total reviews
Comment from Rmocruz
I find this brief poem to be very humorous and entertaining.
The photo-art enhances the message which is a universal one
we humans eventually must address.
Great job!Thanks for the chuckle.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
I find this brief poem to be very humorous and entertaining.
The photo-art enhances the message which is a universal one
we humans eventually must address.
Great job!Thanks for the chuckle.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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So pleased you enjoyed my effort. Thanks for the read and the review.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from kiwijenny
Oh so it's the light bulbs fault...yep I've figured it out . But in my case it's the mirror's fault ..it magnifies 15 times....I start the morning with a yelp.
Skin botchy, ....skin blotchy
Sorry I'd like to say I love this poem...instead...I live this poem
God bless
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
Oh so it's the light bulbs fault...yep I've figured it out . But in my case it's the mirror's fault ..it magnifies 15 times....I start the morning with a yelp.
Skin botchy, ....skin blotchy
Sorry I'd like to say I love this poem...instead...I live this poem
God bless
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Wow, quite a comment. Yeah I surely know about living the words. Who or what else to blame, sometimes it is not good to shed too much light on the subject.
Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from 24chas
This was really funny. I loved the flow of it and the imagery was hilarious. The best part was the last line. Good writing. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
This was really funny. I loved the flow of it and the imagery was hilarious. The best part was the last line. Good writing. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for your review and your kind comments.
Comment from Colin John
I have no six's left or you would have had one. I am getting like that or should i say all us us notice the changes maybe not year after year but after we look in a photo from way back and then look in the mirror and notice a drastic change. So spot on with this one and good luck. Kind Regards John
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
I have no six's left or you would have had one. I am getting like that or should i say all us us notice the changes maybe not year after year but after we look in a photo from way back and then look in the mirror and notice a drastic change. So spot on with this one and good luck. Kind Regards John
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my effort. Looking in the mirror is not a great way to start the day. However, I must say, I'm happy I am able to still see a reflection. Thanks also for a thought of a six.