In The Garden
5-7-5 Trio (contest entry)10 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Debra. I didn't vote in the contest. That's the trouble with contests, no one knows they are there. This is such a nice poem. Thoroughly enjoyable and congratulations on your win. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hi Debra. I didn't vote in the contest. That's the trouble with contests, no one knows they are there. This is such a nice poem. Thoroughly enjoyable and congratulations on your win. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hi Marilyn :)
Thank you so much!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Congrats on First Place!! :) ;) Such a wonderfully warm offering that we can almost smell the fresh air and feel the warmth on our skinss....very cool with so very few syllables! :) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing your ingenuity with everyone, Debra -- and a special thanx for jumping in an joining the 'Springtime Trio' party! :) :) Take care this week! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Congrats on First Place!! :) ;) Such a wonderfully warm offering that we can almost smell the fresh air and feel the warmth on our skinss....very cool with so very few syllables! :) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing your ingenuity with everyone, Debra -- and a special thanx for jumping in an joining the 'Springtime Trio' party! :) :) Take care this week! :) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much, Yvette, for your lovely feedback and the warm congratulations! Thanks also for sponsoring the contest - it was a fun and refreshing prompt :) best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Dean Kuch
You've managed to capture in words the warm ambiance of springtime in your 5-7-5 suite, Anonymous Poet.
Spring is a welcome reprieve from the cold, cruel harshness of winter. At least in climates where the changes of the seasons are quite dramatic.
Good composition in all three of your springtime 5-7-5's.
I wish you nothing but the best of luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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You've managed to capture in words the warm ambiance of springtime in your 5-7-5 suite, Anonymous Poet.
Spring is a welcome reprieve from the cold, cruel harshness of winter. At least in climates where the changes of the seasons are quite dramatic.
Good composition in all three of your springtime 5-7-5's.
I wish you nothing but the best of luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kind regards...
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My pleasure.
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
This is a well-written and delightful contest entry! Your Trio poems flows perfectly! It is a joy to read and I love the lawnmowers and buzzing bees!
Best of luck in the contest! Deborah
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
This is a well-written and delightful contest entry! Your Trio poems flows perfectly! It is a joy to read and I love the lawnmowers and buzzing bees!
Best of luck in the contest! Deborah
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much, Deborah, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
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Thank you and my pleasure. I enjoy your writing.
Comment from 24chas
I enjoyed these pieces. They really captured a good feeling of spring with the flow and the imagery. The artwork really completed the presentation. Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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I enjoyed these pieces. They really captured a good feeling of spring with the flow and the imagery. The artwork really completed the presentation. Nice job.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Chas :) thank you for your great feedback. Appreciated as always. Best wishes...:)
Comment from Nancy O'Connor1
Nice images. I remember laundry on a line. This sounds like Spring or Summer. I feel warn sun on my body as i check the clothes to see if they are dry.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Nice images. I remember laundry on a line. This sounds like Spring or Summer. I feel warn sun on my body as i check the clothes to see if they are dry.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your feedback, Nancy:)
Comment from Michele Harber
You definitely nailed three aspects of spring, and described each beautifully in your trio of five-seven-five verses. Your use of vivid words ("lush," "colorful abundance," "spluttering") make the pictures you paint easy to "see" and "hear." The image you chose fits perfectly.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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You definitely nailed three aspects of spring, and described each beautifully in your trio of five-seven-five verses. Your use of vivid words ("lush," "colorful abundance," "spluttering") make the pictures you paint easy to "see" and "hear." The image you chose fits perfectly.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much, Michele, for your warm and encouraging feedback. I appreciate you. Best wishes...:)
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You're very welcome, and thank you as well. What a lovely thing to say.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
What a lovely springtime poem! This is a great contest entry that is very well written and effectively complemented by your chosen image. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
What a lovely springtime poem! This is a great contest entry that is very well written and effectively complemented by your chosen image. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate it! Best wishes :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think the lawn mowers drown out the bees! He he he, but you brought the spring indoors with that fresh smelling washing and the array of dandelion, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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I think the lawn mowers drown out the bees! He he he, but you brought the spring indoors with that fresh smelling washing and the array of dandelion, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes :)
Comment from royowen
A great entry of 5/7/5s in this triple stanza contest my friend. O yes indeed, you've had a generally bad winter up north, and I'm sure you're anticipating a lovely upcoming Spring, well done, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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A great entry of 5/7/5s in this triple stanza contest my friend. O yes indeed, you've had a generally bad winter up north, and I'm sure you're anticipating a lovely upcoming Spring, well done, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Roy. I appreciate it, best wishes :)