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Family Ties Volume two.

Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "By These Hands We Are Fed."
Second book Of Series.

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Comment from tempeste
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Your poem is very thought provoking .

Sadly being a mother these days is not seen as much of a rewarding / gratifying "job " as it should and merits.

More women want to pursue a career as a means to accomplish something worthy in life.

Their are other women that want to eat their �came and still have it : they want a career and also a family, a child .

the truth is you can't do both well .

When you are pursuing a career there is no 9 to 5 schedule

..working overtime goes without saying....

hence your child will grow up with various nannies/babysitters and you will see them 1/2 an hour before bed time...

having to travel for business is also a likelihood so Skype will become a habitual thing ...

if you believe differently , you're fooling yourself.

Conclusion: The truth is that being a mother is not only a tough job but it's one of the most important ones cause the wel being and success of our society stems from our children growing up in a loving , caring , balanced family environment, where the mother is 100% present and focused on her child / children.

Your poem is very simple but for those that take a moment to let the scene you describe sink in , one can see that at the heart of it there is a very important message.

A mother's role today is sadly underestimated and we will all pay the price for that ..we are creating a loveless , uncaring society, world.




 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    HELLO TEMPESTE: You told me that you weren't interested in getting married and having children. WOW. Now I see why. I can not see how you could possibly have a better reason.
    Your last line says it all. You are an extremely intelligent person, Tempeste. I am truly blessed to have you for a friend. I thank you for everything. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from mkflood
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I remember you telling me this on the phone yesterday. It is cute. I scrolled through the book. Very cool. I'll get this over to the grandkids and see what they think.. wink..give ya a holler later on.. great job overall.. MKFlood

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Having the undivided attention of your Mother is a treasure to behold, but tasting her cooking is even better, your words are enjoyed here Rhonnie, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    HELLO DOLLY: Thank you so much. You are appreciated. I liked your review as usual. Your fan-friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from patcelaw
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The only time I spend in the kitchen is to heat my packaged food each meal in the microwave oven. Because of my eyesight my family will not let me use a knife.
Patricia

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    HELLO PATRICIA: Thank you for reviewing and commenting on my poem. I've imagined that perhaps you were a mom at one time or another. So you can relate to my poem. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.