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Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Window of Opportunity "Eclectic mix
10 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is such a wise poem. Your first stanza is downright philosophical. I perceive opportunities as something to seize. Otherwise you live your life with regrets. I can't even imagine an instance where an opportunity could lead to a "deterioration of one's soul." That is the only line that I wondered about. It was a good observation to see an opportunity as sometimes being a mirage. They don't always pan out after all.
You give me lots to ponder here. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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This is such a wise poem. Your first stanza is downright philosophical. I perceive opportunities as something to seize. Otherwise you live your life with regrets. I can't even imagine an instance where an opportunity could lead to a "deterioration of one's soul." That is the only line that I wondered about. It was a good observation to see an opportunity as sometimes being a mirage. They don't always pan out after all.
You give me lots to ponder here. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Didn?t you know I?m wise and philosophical already!? LOL. As to ?deterioration of one?s soul? I was thinking of the opportunity to get, use, and become addicted to street drugs. I thank you so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Alliteration, well used, so too the internal rhyme in your free verse Trish. A great choice of topic, the window of opportunity. Well done, enjoyed,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Alliteration, well used, so too the internal rhyme in your free verse Trish. A great choice of topic, the window of opportunity. Well done, enjoyed,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
Yes, it's true, one never knows. It's difficult to know when an opportunity is going to lead us to better things.
Lovely poem and presentation.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Yes, it's true, one never knows. It's difficult to know when an opportunity is going to lead us to better things.
Lovely poem and presentation.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the window of opportunity that we somnetimes ignore or just don't notice when it comes to us. We should always be prepared and ready when the opportunity comes our way.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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A very well-written free verse poem about the window of opportunity that we somnetimes ignore or just don't notice when it comes to us. We should always be prepared and ready when the opportunity comes our way.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Sandra, thank you so much,
Hugs, Trisha
I hope your power situation resolved very soon
Comment from Earl Corp
This is the first free verse poem I have ever given a six star rating to. I enjoyed I like the comparisons of opportunity to an oasis, caution, and a chamelion. Your poem made sense and invoked emotions within the reader. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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This is the first free verse poem I have ever given a six star rating to. I enjoyed I like the comparisons of opportunity to an oasis, caution, and a chamelion. Your poem made sense and invoked emotions within the reader. Very nice job.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Earl, for a wonderful complimentary review! I feel doubly honored to be the first for free verse . I am especially happy that you took the opportunity to read my poem!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
You always have such an emotion to your free verse, Trish -- love to share in your 'visions' with you! :) ;) This is a great one about life's windows of opportunity -- what cool allegories! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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You always have such an emotion to your free verse, Trish -- love to share in your 'visions' with you! :) ;) This is a great one about life's windows of opportunity -- what cool allegories! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Yvette, thank you for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write, and I loved these words: "Opportunity is often thrown to the wind
along with its cousin caution" we reach a crossroads in life and taking the wrong road means everything changes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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A poignant write, and I loved these words: "Opportunity is often thrown to the wind
along with its cousin caution" we reach a crossroads in life and taking the wrong road means everything changes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you, as always, for your positive reviews. I?m glad you liked the way that I used the opportunity to create a free style poem ! LOL
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Trisha.
-I like the colored fonts,
and the topic is a good one.
-I also like how you incorporate
the word opportunity
in each verse.
-The description is also
effective, along with
comparisons to an oasis,
and a chameleon; the lines
following that are good with
the addition of alliteration.
-A good conclusion, too.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Trisha.
-I like the colored fonts,
and the topic is a good one.
-I also like how you incorporate
the word opportunity
in each verse.
-The description is also
effective, along with
comparisons to an oasis,
and a chameleon; the lines
following that are good with
the addition of alliteration.
-A good conclusion, too.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Whoa, Pam! I was very honored to get such a wonderful review. The opportunity of meeting a club challenge was well rewarded! Thank you
Hugs, Trisha
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You are very welcome and deserving, Trisha. I enjoy reviewing and sharing ideas, especially when the piece is good. I enjoyed yours very much.
Comment from kiwijenny
I loved the colors...turquoise grabbed me and red has its dire warning. I loved the admonition to seize the day..
life, love, and learning can linger
Luxuriate, levitate or leave....
God bless
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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I loved the colors...turquoise grabbed me and red has its dire warning. I loved the admonition to seize the day..
life, love, and learning can linger
Luxuriate, levitate or leave....
God bless
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Hi, KJ Thank you for your positive review! I?m happy you seized the opportunity to read my free verse.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Bucket,
This is very well written and a great contest entry. I like the changing colors and the truth conveyed in your verse.
Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Bucket,
This is very well written and a great contest entry. I like the changing colors and the truth conveyed in your verse.
Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
