Comment from Halfree

Excellent

Very catchy and well done...this is second comment I have keyed in and is really the first but I had to write more because FS said I need to say more so here goes More More More and then More

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

LOL!

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

If this is how you're making us all yearn desparately for the sun Aiona you're doing a good job of it! Love the picture from your sailboat... I didn't recognize the names of the islands so I'll look and see just where you are! :)

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

I'm in Anacortes, Washington. The islands in the picture are northeast of me. Saddlebag is named because it looks like a saddlebag. I'm told there are wildlflowers there that ONLY bloom in May, and when you walk in them, the smell of perfume wafts up from them, as you walk.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

LOve the one line poem for the contest. You kept it to one line and yet still added a moral to the whole piece. Yes we have to adjust our 'sails' once in a while according to what the wind brings

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

Thank you, Barb. Sometimes I wish the wind would steady a little. These past two years have felt like a constant storm. I'm a little tired, but still sailing. I hope your journey is going fine too!

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Aiona,

Ha ha ha! This is a great monostich and a super contest entry. You've said so much in just a few words -- great truth here. I like the image and color scheme you've selected, as they complement your short poem very nicely. I don't see anything that I could suggest you consider improving upon. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing your work. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

Thank you, Jan.