Seasonal Ovation
A Lune Contest Offering8 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is so lovely, just as a lune should be. Your last line is the perfect summation for your first two. And, your coloring and presentation are perfect as well.
Your fine work should take the prize. Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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This is so lovely, just as a lune should be. Your last line is the perfect summation for your first two. And, your coloring and presentation are perfect as well.
Your fine work should take the prize. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thanx for the review on this one, MQ! :)
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I could tell that it was yours, Yvette. It was too good not to be.
Comment from LIJ Red
Aachoo. Goldenrod and I do not love each other, though a field of the stuff is visually striking...this looks like a sound and proper Lune entry for the contest.
My old yard maple is covered with opening buds all ruby red...
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Aachoo. Goldenrod and I do not love each other, though a field of the stuff is visually striking...this looks like a sound and proper Lune entry for the contest.
My old yard maple is covered with opening buds all ruby red...
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Funny man! :) ;) Thanx for the review, LlJ -- always appreciated! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting write and I love the last line". "Welcome mat for spring" how wonderfully true and it will soon be upon us too, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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This is an uplifting write and I love the last line". "Welcome mat for spring" how wonderfully true and it will soon be upon us too, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Your review is appreciated.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent image that you produce through this writing. That is a very creative way to view that scene which I had never thought of. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this unique poem.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Excellent image that you produce through this writing. That is a very creative way to view that scene which I had never thought of. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this unique poem.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
There is no limit to your imagination and wit, is there! This is wonderful, Yvette -- truly an inspiration. spring is my favorite season, and in one tiny poem you have managed to make me excited about it's arrival this week!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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There is no limit to your imagination and wit, is there! This is wonderful, Yvette -- truly an inspiration. spring is my favorite season, and in one tiny poem you have managed to make me excited about it's arrival this week!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from JudyE
A field or paddock covered in blossoms certainly heralds spring and does indeed look like a carpet. I don't have any suggestions that would enhance your engaging piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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A field or paddock covered in blossoms certainly heralds spring and does indeed look like a carpet. I don't have any suggestions that would enhance your engaging piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Like this Lune format for your goldenrod coloring. My go-to verse is 575, so I may need to consider Lune.
'goldenrod carpet' is a wonderful allusion that you reinforced with your text color
unsure if you need caps for anything, or consider 'WELCOME mat' as we often 'see' it on the porch of homes
Spring is obvious, but 'March' or 'May' can be alternatives to be more descriptive for your 'timing.'
best wishes in this prompt entry.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Like this Lune format for your goldenrod coloring. My go-to verse is 575, so I may need to consider Lune.
'goldenrod carpet' is a wonderful allusion that you reinforced with your text color
unsure if you need caps for anything, or consider 'WELCOME mat' as we often 'see' it on the porch of homes
Spring is obvious, but 'March' or 'May' can be alternatives to be more descriptive for your 'timing.'
best wishes in this prompt entry.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from 24chas
I liked this read. I like when poems look at things in a different way and this is one of those. A great vision to see a welcome mat ushering in spring. Nice job.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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I liked this read. I like when poems look at things in a different way and this is one of those. A great vision to see a welcome mat ushering in spring. Nice job.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
