Dreams Come True
A loop poem6 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
For a first attempt you nailed it like a pro! Great end rhyming also. This loops beautifully and seems effortless...the real teller of professionalism. Loved it!
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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For a first attempt you nailed it like a pro! Great end rhyming also. This loops beautifully and seems effortless...the real teller of professionalism. Loved it!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Miss Sherry
Lovely loop poetry for the contest. I wish you the very best of luck with your entry.
I know He will be pleased with your write, as it is just lovely and your accompanying artwork is very pretty.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Lovely loop poetry for the contest. I wish you the very best of luck with your entry.
I know He will be pleased with your write, as it is just lovely and your accompanying artwork is very pretty.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome! My joy.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well-done loop that fits the format and carries it throughout without a break -- a wonderful job, Suzie-Q! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Well-done loop that fits the format and carries it throughout without a break -- a wonderful job, Suzie-Q! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from kiwijenny
This is a very good first attempt...sometimes the words repeated don't flow but this does...great job
My favorite stanza
As I reflect, I am truly amazed
Amazed by the glory of God's love
Love that surrounds me like a blanket of peace
Peace in purest form from Heaven above
God bless
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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This is a very good first attempt...sometimes the words repeated don't flow but this does...great job
My favorite stanza
As I reflect, I am truly amazed
Amazed by the glory of God's love
Love that surrounds me like a blanket of peace
Peace in purest form from Heaven above
God bless
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Suzie,
Your poem is a lovely religious loop and a great contest entry. Reading it, one would never know it is your first attempt at writing a loop. Your strong religious beliefs are quite evident in your poem. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Suzie,
Your poem is a lovely religious loop and a great contest entry. Reading it, one would never know it is your first attempt at writing a loop. Your strong religious beliefs are quite evident in your poem. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever loop about dreams coming true and this is a faithful and loving write and I enjoyed the blanket of peace this poem brought to me today, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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A clever loop about dreams coming true and this is a faithful and loving write and I enjoyed the blanket of peace this poem brought to me today, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much!