If I Had to Describe It...
A 5-7-5 Contest Entry8 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hmmm. Now THAT'S a new take on the weather! It was a perfect idea to inset the photo of the mints. Very clever. I hope it does well for you in the contest. Good luck. xo
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Hmmm. Now THAT'S a new take on the weather! It was a perfect idea to inset the photo of the mints. Very clever. I hope it does well for you in the contest. Good luck. xo
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It does kind of look like candy doesn't it. I think it reminds me of skittles. And I don't think I've ever had homemade buttercream mints but I do think I know what you're talking about. You did a great job
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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It does kind of look like candy doesn't it. I think it reminds me of skittles. And I don't think I've ever had homemade buttercream mints but I do think I know what you're talking about. You did a great job
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review! ;)
Comment from donette1914
how pretty and it does like buttercream mints
Very clever use of your words that draws ones in and that takes talent.
The photo goes well
It was a pleasure to read you're fine well-penned work.
I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 3/17/2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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how pretty and it does like buttercream mints
Very clever use of your words that draws ones in and that takes talent.
The photo goes well
It was a pleasure to read you're fine well-penned work.
I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 3/17/2019
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely comments, Donette, and thanx for dropping in for the review - always so good to hear from you!! :) ;) Be sure to enjoy the remainder of the weekend! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! I tasted the sunshine here and your words tickled my tastebuds and reminded me of the beautiful pink sunshine scene, magical . . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Wow! I tasted the sunshine here and your words tickled my tastebuds and reminded me of the beautiful pink sunshine scene, magical . . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely comments, Lance, and thanx for dropping in for the review - always so good to hear from you!! :) ;) Be sure to enjoy the remainder of the weekend! ;)
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I could taste those buttercreams which I most frequently recall being found at a wedding. Nice artwork with the sun and candies together. Good 5-7-5 syllable count. No critique from me. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I could taste those buttercreams which I most frequently recall being found at a wedding. Nice artwork with the sun and candies together. Good 5-7-5 syllable count. No critique from me. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely comments, Lance, and thanx for dropping in for the review - good to hear from you!! :) ;) Know that you're welcome to stop by any time, contest or not! ;) ;) Be sure to enjoy the remainder of the weekend! ;)
Comment from Njorgensen
Yes! The taste of sunshine! Definitely has to be sweet and buttery, right? With concise description you painted a smooth and creamy picture that could almost be tasted. Good job!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Yes! The taste of sunshine! Definitely has to be sweet and buttery, right? With concise description you painted a smooth and creamy picture that could almost be tasted. Good job!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely comments, Njorgensen, and thanx for dropping in for the review - good to hear from you!! :) ;) Know that you're welcome to stop by any time, contest or not! ;) ;) Be sure to enjoy the remainder of the weekend! ;)
Comment from Janilou
Beautiful imagery here. Buttercream mints are one of my favorites, and the next time I feel the warm sunshine on my face, I will think of your poem. :-)
Nothing to suggest in the way of improvements and no corrections or edits needed here. All the best. Thanks for the delightful poem.
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the "Julu' series)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Beautiful imagery here. Buttercream mints are one of my favorites, and the next time I feel the warm sunshine on my face, I will think of your poem. :-)
Nothing to suggest in the way of improvements and no corrections or edits needed here. All the best. Thanks for the delightful poem.
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the "Julu' series)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Oh, thank you so very much for your lovely comments, Janilou - and thank you for dropping in for the review today -- please know that you're welcome to stop in anytime...contest or not... I'll have some iced tea waiting! ;) ;) LOL!
Comment from 24chas
This was really imaginative and creative. I love the comparison of the two and can see where you're coming from. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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This was really imaginative and creative. I love the comparison of the two and can see where you're coming from. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review - I am glad you could relate. Have a great day! ;)
