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Dawn of Chaos

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Comment from country ranch writer
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To have and to hold dearly the one and only pal one could depend on.in a young ones life. Time marches on and all is well for years to come with one pal you could depend on a special car!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Funny thing never owned a car, given statement in write viewed about others, thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, My Car, contains all the emotional connectivity of a man and his automobile. The unrevised text leads the reader to the understanding that crossing Ts and dotting Is has nothing to do with this car.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Interesting reply about this write, capturing a slight bit of generated tingles, thanking you for your generous rate on certain aspects.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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As always, written in your very own signature style that delivers a free-verse with wonderful emotions for your car -- an interesting Love Poem offering for the contest. I wish you luck! ;) ;)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    My resolution of my writes pit would be my win, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.