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Proposed Wearin' of the Green

Because the Frenchman knows how to get his lass...

9 total reviews 
Comment from DeborahWrite
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Dear Author,
This is a fun Limerick! I enjoyed your clever portrayal of stylish French Cyrus with his em'rald tux! It was bright and happy!
My best in this contest, Deborah

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Thank you for your review, Deborah -- always appeciated! ;)
Comment from Dawn Munro
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LOL. !!!

Turning a Bit Green

I can easily 'see' this man's tux,
tho' my tummy is suff'ring some flux.
See, I do love the green,
if you get what I mean --
but a shamrock, not romance "deluxe".

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    LOL! Yeah, I'll take the leprechaun with his pot o' gold any day! :) ;) Thanx for your review on this one -- hope you're finding some sunshine to help you smile up there with Miss Priss, O Lady of the North! ;) ;) Take care! ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-writen Duo Limerick about the Frenchman that knows exactly to get the girl he adores the most. Acting like a leprechaun he quickly wins the heart of his Irish girl.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    You are the only one that saw the 'leprechaun proposal' that Cy was going for, Sandra! ;) :) Thanx for your review -- you made me smile this morning! ;) :)
Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
This is a very well written double limerick - good meter and rhyme scheme with effective use of alliteration throughout. Also, fun - which is important!!
Good Luck in the voting booth :)
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this one, Debra -- I certainly had some fun with it! :) :) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A clever Limerick with a mixed syllable count, but nevertheless, inventive, I wish you luck with the contest, a fun Limerick, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this one, Dolly -- I certainly had some fun with it! :) :) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! :)

Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Contest Author,

Ha ha ha! This is a really cute St. Patty's Day limerick and very well written. Very clever and creative story you tell in your verse. (I'd love to see him all dressed up in a green tux and top hat.) This should be a strong contender in the competition. Thanks for sharing and best of luck. Jan

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this one, Jan -- I certainly had some fun with it! :) :) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! :)
Comment from D.Ream
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This is a highly effective limerick and the reader is able to recognise the pattern and rhythm that we expect. I loved the humour of this and the imaginative story that it created. Good luck in the contest!


Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this one, D-Ream -- I certainly had some fun with it! :) :) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! :)
Comment from kiwijenny
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Twas not just the tux he did don...Oh no!
Top hat and white gloves accented this beau -
When he fell to one knee,
She responded with glee,

I love limericks... it is amazing that Irish with twinkling eyes write such poems
God bless

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this one, Jenny -- I certainly had some fun with it! :) :) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! :)
Comment from Lance S. Loria
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This is an excellent double stanza limerick. T'is a blessing to behold! LoL. Seriously, I loved the story and the great rhyming. Good and colorful artwork also.
I'm thinking of entering this contest too...
but nothing as good as you.
A truly great job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this one, Lance -- I certainly had some fun with it! :) :) Please join in the fun! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! :)