Man for God
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Comment from LIJ Red
Wise move, outlining the required words in red. The life we receive is subject to the whims of heredity and environment, and the laws of God guide us in a desperate game. Excellent entry.
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Wise move, outlining the required words in red. The life we receive is subject to the whims of heredity and environment, and the laws of God guide us in a desperate game. Excellent entry.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
Comment from Dean Kuch
I've discovered while growing older that it is better to give than to receive, to treat people with tact, compassion and respect, to follow the "Golden Rule," and to do my utmost best to live by God's fundamental commandments in order that I may lead a rewarding, fulfilling, and God-fearing life.
Through prayer and supplication, reading God's Holy Word everyday and remaining as humble as humanly possible while glorifying God, we simply can't go wrong.
Best of luck to you in the contest, Dr. Alcreator.
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I've discovered while growing older that it is better to give than to receive, to treat people with tact, compassion and respect, to follow the "Golden Rule," and to do my utmost best to live by God's fundamental commandments in order that I may lead a rewarding, fulfilling, and God-fearing life.
Through prayer and supplication, reading God's Holy Word everyday and remaining as humble as humanly possible while glorifying God, we simply can't go wrong.
Best of luck to you in the contest, Dr. Alcreator.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual piece, God Whispers to Me a Life, promotes the idea that our communications are built on others understanding our intent, well over our words.
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This spiritual piece, God Whispers to Me a Life, promotes the idea that our communications are built on others understanding our intent, well over our words.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
Smiles it looks like that you have the # of word requires and I like how your used the four necessary words
*God, mortal, immortal and living
are in red. *
Question Alcreator Litt Dear, what needs to be corrected.
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
Smiles it looks like that you have the # of word requires and I like how your used the four necessary words
*God, mortal, immortal and living
are in red. *
Question Alcreator Litt Dear, what needs to be corrected.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
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Thank you but your point is not clear, please clarify what you are talking about. Please I do hope you would clarify your words to help me. .
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Second review
Alcreator Litt Dear what I was saying, I don't see anything that has to be changed or edited with your fine entry
God Whispers to Me a Life with that you have the # of word requires and I like how your used the four necessary words
*God, mortal, immortal and living
are in red. *
Gert
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Thank you. But I have used 4 prompted words rightly but for finding the 4 words easy read, I have used put them in red, so there is no violation of prompt, in the prompt only 4 words are required and not 7 words as you have written mistakenly, where the prompt is written 7 words you read as you have written mistakenly, in my Author Notes I mentioned: "Word count: 382 words; God, mortal, immortal and living - 4 prompt words are in red". and you have ignored, while in the prompt it is clearly mentioned: "Write a Non-Fiction in between 350 and 400 words defining what is a life using four words: God, immortal, mortal, and living" and accordingly I have used all 4 words, where is the violation of prompt, you are making a mistake, if you are considering 7 words of the Author Notes without considering the Prompt, it is a mistake, and if you are treating Author Notes as yardstick, then why you are not considering all the 15 words --- Word count: 382 words; God, mortal, immortal and living - 4 prompt words are in red, and why you are considering only 4 words, I never understand.
Hope, I have clarified the point, and the mistake you have done.
Besides, an author in a contest can use the prompted words in any colour so that readers can find the prompted words are there in the contest entry, and all other writers do the same, and it is no violation.
So, there is no need of correction of prompt and no need of deleting 4 prompted words in red, since there is no violation.
Please verify the facts and rate the post accordingly and be obliged.
With best of luck.
Cordially yours,
Alcreator Litt Dear
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PS: If no change or edit requires, why ** stars rating is given to the work, hope it was mistakenly clicked, so please rate the work as you please.
Thanking you once again,
Alcreator Litt Dear
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I read your message that I just received, What the mistake was me not clicking on the right rating, which I have changed to a well deserved 5*****
Forgive me
Gert
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Thank you.
Best wishes.
Alcreator Litt Dear
Comment from called2rite
I do like this whisper of God! It so depicts what life is about, however, I'm not sure what paragraph God is whispering to you or if sometimes, you are whispering back to God. Maybe in paragraph two, you are starting to tell others about what God whispered to, with the paragraphs starting with "Oh man"?
Keep up the wonderful spiritual matters in the spiritual realm. comment made on 3-15-19by called2rite.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
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I do like this whisper of God! It so depicts what life is about, however, I'm not sure what paragraph God is whispering to you or if sometimes, you are whispering back to God. Maybe in paragraph two, you are starting to tell others about what God whispered to, with the paragraphs starting with "Oh man"?
Keep up the wonderful spiritual matters in the spiritual realm. comment made on 3-15-19by called2rite.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
It's an interesting and educative piece of Spiritual Non-Fiction meeting the required norms, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive as well as lucid wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end making the theme crystal clear:
"Have faith in God, and keep yourself in touch with your soul if you want to make your this mortal life blissful and immortal; Otherwise you are bound to lead an ignoble life - a life just like the 'living death'.
Style and Presentation - Noteworthy.
Best of Luck!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
It's an interesting and educative piece of Spiritual Non-Fiction meeting the required norms, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive as well as lucid wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end making the theme crystal clear:
"Have faith in God, and keep yourself in touch with your soul if you want to make your this mortal life blissful and immortal; Otherwise you are bound to lead an ignoble life - a life just like the 'living death'.
Style and Presentation - Noteworthy.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
Comment from WryWriter
I so enjoyed reading this. Your work expresses freedom to choose. Follow God's plan and be blessed. A beautiful artwork choice for your theme. I especially liked this: "God makes His Plan for each life but you are the real doer of your life." Too many times, we need to let go of the steering wheel and let God take over.
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I so enjoyed reading this. Your work expresses freedom to choose. Follow God's plan and be blessed. A beautiful artwork choice for your theme. I especially liked this: "God makes His Plan for each life but you are the real doer of your life." Too many times, we need to let go of the steering wheel and let God take over.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from GWinterwin
Enjoyed your thoughts on this subject of life. I agree we are free moral agents given a life that includes body, soul and spirit. We are free to live any way we choose but if God is not included in that life the end will not be good. If we live in a way that glorifies God we will also be blessed during our time on earth. Good job, thanks for sharing. God bless always.
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Enjoyed your thoughts on this subject of life. I agree we are free moral agents given a life that includes body, soul and spirit. We are free to live any way we choose but if God is not included in that life the end will not be good. If we live in a way that glorifies God we will also be blessed during our time on earth. Good job, thanks for sharing. God bless always.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from meeshu
this is a fine piece. it has a great cadence and pace. I was especially interested in your understanding of what souls are. excellent language, structure. well done, DR. AL...........................meeshu
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this is a fine piece. it has a great cadence and pace. I was especially interested in your understanding of what souls are. excellent language, structure. well done, DR. AL...........................meeshu
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from royowen
It's quite definitely tru that God is the creator, the giver of life, but also the giver of eternal through His Son Jesus, who loved us and gave Himself for us. Fulfilling the promise of Genesis 3:15. A beautifully written dialogue of the truth God dispenses. Well done my friend, blessings, Roy
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It's quite definitely tru that God is the creator, the giver of life, but also the giver of eternal through His Son Jesus, who loved us and gave Himself for us. Fulfilling the promise of Genesis 3:15. A beautifully written dialogue of the truth God dispenses. Well done my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
