Man for God
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "God Whispers to Me a Life "God Helps man who lives to work for mankind
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Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
Again, another wonderful writing about our God. God's whisper comes in so any ways if we listen. If we do not hear it, it is due to our own dissolution. I have heard his whisper many times and caught myself questioning it. He has proven time and time again that I should not question His whispers!
Well done
Thanks for sharing
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Again, another wonderful writing about our God. God's whisper comes in so any ways if we listen. If we do not hear it, it is due to our own dissolution. I have heard his whisper many times and caught myself questioning it. He has proven time and time again that I should not question His whispers!
Well done
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
This iz a very good explanation of Free Will and what happens if we use it to live a Godly life and listen to God's whispered suggestions. Good luck in the contest.
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This iz a very good explanation of Free Will and what happens if we use it to live a Godly life and listen to God's whispered suggestions. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Sylvia Page
Alcreator, You send out a clear message in this beautiful creation. All the words required by the contest have been used in a faultless manner and meets the contest criteria perfectly,
Best wishes
Sylvia
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Alcreator, You send out a clear message in this beautiful creation. All the words required by the contest have been used in a faultless manner and meets the contest criteria perfectly,
Best wishes
Sylvia
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. I saw no overt evidence of SPAG making for a smooth and enjoyable read. You deliver a profound and provocative definition of 'life' in this well penned piece. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly. I saw no overt evidence of SPAG making for a smooth and enjoyable read. You deliver a profound and provocative definition of 'life' in this well penned piece. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
I found the work very readable it is an excellent commentary on our physical and spiritual relationship to God. One of my favorite statements was: "God makes His Plan for each life but you are the real doer of your life." It demonstrate the gift of free will we are given.
I published a piece called origins on the website a few weeks ago and the question it poses is, how do you account for the human soul. It was directed towards people that believe in evolution and reject the creation of God. I found your work uplifting and well-written. Z
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I found the work very readable it is an excellent commentary on our physical and spiritual relationship to God. One of my favorite statements was: "God makes His Plan for each life but you are the real doer of your life." It demonstrate the gift of free will we are given.
I published a piece called origins on the website a few weeks ago and the question it poses is, how do you account for the human soul. It was directed towards people that believe in evolution and reject the creation of God. I found your work uplifting and well-written. Z
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from way2gokevs
You covered your story of life and included all the words as per contest.
Bit puzzled by your last sentence, you wrote if you avoid gods, plan, you can still have a positive life.................Well I plan my life around life everyday. Thanks for sharing and best of luck. Cheers, Kev.
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You covered your story of life and included all the words as per contest.
Bit puzzled by your last sentence, you wrote if you avoid gods, plan, you can still have a positive life.................Well I plan my life around life everyday. Thanks for sharing and best of luck. Cheers, Kev.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from Chelsea Caffey
I love the sentiment throughout this writing. I enjoy reading about the separation of our souls from our bodies. The line that hits home hardest is:
"God makes His plan for each life but you are the real doer of your life."
It's a beautiful reminder that our own actions and our own free will are truly our own. I do also believe that God will guide us as we choose our own paths.
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I love the sentiment throughout this writing. I enjoy reading about the separation of our souls from our bodies. The line that hits home hardest is:
"God makes His plan for each life but you are the real doer of your life."
It's a beautiful reminder that our own actions and our own free will are truly our own. I do also believe that God will guide us as we choose our own paths.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
Comment from Leah Jessop
I love the message it is very moving and indispensable. The sentences seem quite long, but not really run on.
It is very beautiful and God inspired. That is all that really matters.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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I love the message it is very moving and indispensable. The sentences seem quite long, but not really run on.
It is very beautiful and God inspired. That is all that really matters.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your feedback. Please clarify and explain your point I do not understand your words expressively.
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
You know this write comes across to me in two different ways, someone whom is soul-searching for answers and finds them within but also like a street preacher voicing his ideals outwards. I like the repeated starting words for each paragraph as this is what gives it a human and preacher feel and it has the content and wording you'd expect from someone of that nature. Like God whispers to him and he bellows it out :) Nicely written and expressed.
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You know this write comes across to me in two different ways, someone whom is soul-searching for answers and finds them within but also like a street preacher voicing his ideals outwards. I like the repeated starting words for each paragraph as this is what gives it a human and preacher feel and it has the content and wording you'd expect from someone of that nature. Like God whispers to him and he bellows it out :) Nicely written and expressed.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is so beautiful and it reminds me of being written in the style of the song street from Bible. It is a beautiful expression of me and reaching out to his creator
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This is so beautiful and it reminds me of being written in the style of the song street from Bible. It is a beautiful expression of me and reaching out to his creator
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
