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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "God Whispers to Me a Life "God Helps man who lives to work for mankind
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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
He gifts you a life with a soul. You are free to choose, maintain and make a good life.' So true. It is up to us as mortals to try to live by our great Lord's example. This is wonderful work and very spiritual I enjoyed and appreciated it very much kindest regards M x
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He gifts you a life with a soul. You are free to choose, maintain and make a good life.' So true. It is up to us as mortals to try to live by our great Lord's example. This is wonderful work and very spiritual I enjoyed and appreciated it very much kindest regards M x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
Comment from Talia Shilling Rabin
I have read some of your poetry, and this writing reflects the emotion and detail I have seen in those poems. In some ways, this almost sounds like a poem just because of it's flow. I really love it!
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I have read some of your poetry, and this writing reflects the emotion and detail I have seen in those poems. In some ways, this almost sounds like a poem just because of it's flow. I really love it!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi Daniel,
This is a very heart felt and well written piece. I agree with most all you have stated. I'm not sure I understand your last lines.
I'd like to thank you for expressing your strong faith and sharing it here with us so eloquently.
AnnaLinda
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Hi Daniel,
This is a very heart felt and well written piece. I agree with most all you have stated. I'm not sure I understand your last lines.
I'd like to thank you for expressing your strong faith and sharing it here with us so eloquently.
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Jay Squires
I don't know quite how to approach your writing from the standpoint of one writer trying to help another writer. This is because you lay out all the ground rules before each post that tell the reader he can expect repetition throughout and that discussion of God whispering to you is inviolate, so do not go there. And somehow, by reading these "conditions" to our review we are "sav [ing] our resources and time."
You leave me only room to say that I find your content a tad lacking in anything nourishing. I don't find you've taught me anything I couldn't have learned in a Sunday school class--and it would be taught with more humility.
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I don't know quite how to approach your writing from the standpoint of one writer trying to help another writer. This is because you lay out all the ground rules before each post that tell the reader he can expect repetition throughout and that discussion of God whispering to you is inviolate, so do not go there. And somehow, by reading these "conditions" to our review we are "sav [ing] our resources and time."
You leave me only room to say that I find your content a tad lacking in anything nourishing. I don't find you've taught me anything I couldn't have learned in a Sunday school class--and it would be taught with more humility.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from mobileliz
Very good explanation of what a life is. God has a plan for everyone, but He has chosen to give Man freedom of choice. He wants obedience not puppets. But with freedom to choose comes responsibility for our own actions. The piece explains all this every well.
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Very good explanation of what a life is. God has a plan for everyone, but He has chosen to give Man freedom of choice. He wants obedience not puppets. But with freedom to choose comes responsibility for our own actions. The piece explains all this every well.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This is beautiful and sentimental...a fine write about what life is!! I so enjoy your writing...it has an elegant simplicity. I feel revived after I read your work...I stop and pray for the Lord to renew me.
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This is beautiful and sentimental...a fine write about what life is!! I so enjoy your writing...it has an elegant simplicity. I feel revived after I read your work...I stop and pray for the Lord to renew me.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Faith and prayers are the best vitamins to lead a healthy and peaceful life. Once we place our trust in Him, we should not get stressed. For he won't give anything to us that we can't handle. I enjoyed your very well written. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
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Faith and prayers are the best vitamins to lead a healthy and peaceful life. Once we place our trust in Him, we should not get stressed. For he won't give anything to us that we can't handle. I enjoyed your very well written. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Dilettante junior
Nice work. You did it again. I am very inspired by how you choose to write on your own terms, on a topic of your choosing, in a technique that you wish. That is very bold and awesome. Nice poem and message! Keep it up!
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Nice work. You did it again. I am very inspired by how you choose to write on your own terms, on a topic of your choosing, in a technique that you wish. That is very bold and awesome. Nice poem and message! Keep it up!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Ross E Silke
Good job on this! It is clear the purpose and intent of the poem and you use all the words well in this story from the pulpit. Creative, enjoyable, and quite easy to read. Your sentiment is sound and reaches the reader well. I think I took from this something that will help me grow my faith. Yes, God is the one who predestines His will for us we just have to live best we can and focus on Him and give Him praise in everything and eventually we will find our place in His plan just like you say in your intro that God has a plan for your being on here and where you are at. Good work, A
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Good job on this! It is clear the purpose and intent of the poem and you use all the words well in this story from the pulpit. Creative, enjoyable, and quite easy to read. Your sentiment is sound and reaches the reader well. I think I took from this something that will help me grow my faith. Yes, God is the one who predestines His will for us we just have to live best we can and focus on Him and give Him praise in everything and eventually we will find our place in His plan just like you say in your intro that God has a plan for your being on here and where you are at. Good work, A
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
Comment from Anya Trofimova
A very strong message comes through in this piece - as you say yourself, these words are indeed timeless. I particularly enjoyed the use of repetition in this story. It functions as a mantra or chorus in a song.
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A very strong message comes through in this piece - as you say yourself, these words are indeed timeless. I particularly enjoyed the use of repetition in this story. It functions as a mantra or chorus in a song.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
