The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Destiny Hope Reason and Faith "Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from BeasPeas
Hi GMartinez. I see that this poem placed second in a contest. Congratulations for that. Your poem is well worded and rhymed. I've read a few other pieces by your and like this one best because it is easier to read. A few of the others use capitals throughout. Is there a reason for doing that? I'm just curious. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Hi GMartinez. I see that this poem placed second in a contest. Congratulations for that. Your poem is well worded and rhymed. I've read a few other pieces by your and like this one best because it is easier to read. A few of the others use capitals throughout. Is there a reason for doing that? I'm just curious. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments,
Yes, the capitalized words are meant to emphasize those words and at times when read across and top to bottom of the poem containing a second shortened message attempt. My distinct poem form. Blessings.
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Hi GMartinez. I will keep that in mind as I read future work of yours. Blessings back--Marilyn
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your poem, a quatrain, fit beautifully with its content and your writing style. Faith is such a meaningful aspect of 'our' destiny, that it intrigues us and many of us think about it daily.
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
Your poem, a quatrain, fit beautifully with its content and your writing style. Faith is such a meaningful aspect of 'our' destiny, that it intrigues us and many of us think about it daily.
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments, God Bless you.
Comment from Liberty Justice
LOVELY and I just gave you my thumbs up. Hope you win! Your poem is so emotional and inspirational and what wonderful job you did with faith, reason, destiny and hope as though they were people. GREAT personifications. Read mine also right now. lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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LOVELY and I just gave you my thumbs up. Hope you win! Your poem is so emotional and inspirational and what wonderful job you did with faith, reason, destiny and hope as though they were people. GREAT personifications. Read mine also right now. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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God Bless you and I am Humbled by your vote. I usually read all entries and come across them rating poems, I'll definitely check and comment on yours, your moniker name is on some of my favorites (rings bells), Thanks again.
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Please explain moniker
name. thanks lolol liberty
justice
Comment from JudyE
It must be hard to write with such restrictions as rotating four words but this doesn't sound at all forced.
'Destiny for mothers prayers to be done' - mothers needs an apostrophe after the 's'.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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It must be hard to write with such restrictions as rotating four words but this doesn't sound at all forced.
'Destiny for mothers prayers to be done' - mothers needs an apostrophe after the 's'.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement , I will correct the grammatical error shortly.
Comment from kiwijenny
Hope our souls and pain will be full of glee,
Reason is what helps us to explain it,
Faith is to believe it's for you and me,
Destiny is the shoehorn that makes us fit in.
I don't fit in....Where do I get a shoe horn? I've always been that over creative stranger...I am New Zealander but not truly...Dad is British...so I didn't quite fit in...now I live in America...with dual citizen kids still not fitting in...so need a show horn
God bless...ps. LOVE THE POEM...deserves a six but I'm out
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Hope our souls and pain will be full of glee,
Reason is what helps us to explain it,
Faith is to believe it's for you and me,
Destiny is the shoehorn that makes us fit in.
I don't fit in....Where do I get a shoe horn? I've always been that over creative stranger...I am New Zealander but not truly...Dad is British...so I didn't quite fit in...now I live in America...with dual citizen kids still not fitting in...so need a show horn
God bless...ps. LOVE THE POEM...deserves a six but I'm out
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments, Sorry you feel don't fit in, I can relate as I've been Manager surrounded with people whose perceptions of me were never who I am and was. The thing about Destiny is it has its own time, We can't change that but it happens when ready.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Believe destiny is something that happens whether we want it or not and it is far better to manipulate it before it happens than allow ourselves to fall to it, your words are food for thought, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Believe destiny is something that happens whether we want it or not and it is far better to manipulate it before it happens than allow ourselves to fall to it, your words are food for thought, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review, thoughtful reading of my posting and the excellent rating, I am glad you enjoyed it.