A Divine Union
The Eagle and the Dove5 total reviews
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
This beautiful poem touched me. I enjoyed the entire poem and this line made me pause: "Seeking Spirits that shine with gold." ...and the White Dove.
My best in winning the contest.
Deborah
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
This beautiful poem touched me. I enjoyed the entire poem and this line made me pause: "Seeking Spirits that shine with gold." ...and the White Dove.
My best in winning the contest.
Deborah
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the kind review
Comment from QC Poet
Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight,
The poem has beautiful picturesque verses a differing flowing rythmic sentence structure. Great captivating read concept poem.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight,
The poem has beautiful picturesque verses a differing flowing rythmic sentence structure. Great captivating read concept poem.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Why thank you for the review.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
jsm: beautiful poem about the eagle and dove.
They both are birds that are peacemakers. We also
can fly higher that the critical crows and the chickens
who pick on us. Spirit to spirit we soar in the sky.
flylikeaneagle Stars for you ***********************
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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jsm: beautiful poem about the eagle and dove.
They both are birds that are peacemakers. We also
can fly higher that the critical crows and the chickens
who pick on us. Spirit to spirit we soar in the sky.
flylikeaneagle Stars for you ***********************
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the 6er. Been some time. They are both peacemakers! I like that. I learned a while ago that doves were not white pigeon. Their tail feathers are longer, something that makes them unique.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Do you mean pigeons in the fifth line? No idea what Pidgins are? I'm loving your descriptions, there's a feeling of freedom in your words, a delightful read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Do you mean pigeons in the fifth line? No idea what Pidgins are? I'm loving your descriptions, there's a feeling of freedom in your words, a delightful read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Spelling error Thanks. There might be a deeper message that you can not see. but thanks for the review.
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I might have been a bit distracted by the Pidgins, but I will take another look, love Dolly x
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Pigeons Thanks for your review
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Good luck with the contest x
Comment from kiwijenny
Pigeons...pidgin....is the type of English native Indians used to speak....hmmm how
..I love that the dove signifies love and diffuses anger
It does for us people always
Well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Pigeons...pidgin....is the type of English native Indians used to speak....hmmm how
..I love that the dove signifies love and diffuses anger
It does for us people always
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Spelling error Pigeons! Yes. Thanks for the review.