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Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Thanx so very much for your 'unique obscurity' offering for the Obscure Word 7-9-7, George!! :) :) :) So good to have you join us in exploring the dictionary of the unusual!! Take care and hope to see you again next time!! ;) ;) Y.M.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and positive encouragement, I Am looking forward to contributing soon. Thank you for the Support.
Comment from DeborahWrite
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Dear Author,

Your obscure word reflective of a beautiful time--twilight--in your picture also is beautiful. It fits your lofty that it maybe warns, well. Great poem and I wish you a winning contest entry!

My best,

Deborah

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings to you.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Wow. This one just rolls off the tongue, doesn't it? Good choice. And you even -impressively- made it flow with the rest of this terrific poem! Now THAT's talent. Finally, I love the photo that represents all this excellence. Great job here! Good luck in the contest. Whether it wins or not, I think it's awesome. xo

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and positive encouragement God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Insomnia is a curse and can thwart days and nights as thinking straight is hard with lack of sleep, a poignant write, have you tried counting sheep? It never works though, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
    I just read. Don?t sleep but but 3-4 hours usually. Thank you for the review and Great rating.