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Comment from moongirlwriter
a beautiful, thought provoking poem pinned with love. We will all arrive at the same place one day, our time is yet to come. To be remembered like this can only put a smile on the face of the one you love. Now, I know the last line is most likely written the way it is with intent. . .but, there are too many your, yours and friends. It just doesn't flow quite right and I'm sure can be improved.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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a beautiful, thought provoking poem pinned with love. We will all arrive at the same place one day, our time is yet to come. To be remembered like this can only put a smile on the face of the one you love. Now, I know the last line is most likely written the way it is with intent. . .but, there are too many your, yours and friends. It just doesn't flow quite right and I'm sure can be improved.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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HELLO MOONGIRLWRITER: I reviewed my poem. YES. I see what you're saying here. I've edited it according to your advise. That made it better. Thank you. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this poem. I like how you have paid attention to presentation by adding a relevant illustration and manipulating the background color. I usually suggest manipulating the font size and style as well, but in this case, it contrasts nicely with the background and is easily visible.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you for sharing this poem. I like how you have paid attention to presentation by adding a relevant illustration and manipulating the background color. I usually suggest manipulating the font size and style as well, but in this case, it contrasts nicely with the background and is easily visible.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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HELLO KyColonel Randal: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
