What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Looking for a Home"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
3 total reviews
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Awe FM - yes they are - and I believe this ABC contest entry to be so honest and true. I wish you would have had both a dog and cat in the photo and also I am not sure if you noted the large space below your words and a special character in the bottom lefthand corner. I just want to make sure you see all of this if you are just getting it posted. A great contest entry!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Awe FM - yes they are - and I believe this ABC contest entry to be so honest and true. I wish you would have had both a dog and cat in the photo and also I am not sure if you noted the large space below your words and a special character in the bottom lefthand corner. I just want to make sure you see all of this if you are just getting it posted. A great contest entry!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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I thank you for the stars and review. I tried, but I couldn't find a picture with both a cat and dog. I too, was disappointed! Thank you, as well for the encouragement! Thank you also for pointing out the special character, as I hadn't noticed, but I will go in and take it out.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this ABC poem. I see you have entered this poem in the ABC Poetry Contest and have chosen H-K as your sequential letters. I like the photograph you have chosen to accompany your poem; perhaps manipulating the background color and the font size and style would further improve the presentation. Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you for sharing this ABC poem. I see you have entered this poem in the ABC Poetry Contest and have chosen H-K as your sequential letters. I like the photograph you have chosen to accompany your poem; perhaps manipulating the background color and the font size and style would further improve the presentation. Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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I appreciate your input and will look into changing it. Thanks!
Comment from meeshu
it does seem sad that these animals don't have the opportunity to give their intense love to a human companion. that is when they are truly happy. a good poem, FM.........................meeshu
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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it does seem sad that these animals don't have the opportunity to give their intense love to a human companion. that is when they are truly happy. a good poem, FM.........................meeshu
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you! The review and stars are much appreciated!