Flights of Fantasy
A Cinquain Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I absolutely love peonies and had many of them in my garden in Ohio. Many a boy came to my yard to ask if they could take some to their gal. It was something special around this time of year and into prom season. I miss those babies! I adore your poem so much! I wish you would have had some peonies picture with a butterfly to show here. Good luck in the contest. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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I absolutely love peonies and had many of them in my garden in Ohio. Many a boy came to my yard to ask if they could take some to their gal. It was something special around this time of year and into prom season. I miss those babies! I adore your poem so much! I wish you would have had some peonies picture with a butterfly to show here. Good luck in the contest. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from sfharper
Lovely dreamy setting dancing with the peonies. The butterfly nature is caught by the staccato sound of the format. I like that they act almost like elves, dancing together. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Lovely dreamy setting dancing with the peonies. The butterfly nature is caught by the staccato sound of the format. I like that they act almost like elves, dancing together. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking a ride on my flight of fantasy!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely cinquain! You have touched just the right 'button' words to make the reader practically feel like flying with you! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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What a lovely cinquain! You have touched just the right 'button' words to make the reader practically feel like flying with you! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights on my butterfly fantasy!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
A complete and uplifting verse. Imagery and wording are effective and "paint" a picture of beauty and freedom. Butterflies are symbols of those
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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A complete and uplifting verse. Imagery and wording are effective and "paint" a picture of beauty and freedom. Butterflies are symbols of those
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Yes, freedom is a wonderful feeling. And I do equate butterflies with that feeling. Thank you for taking the time to share your insights.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-The imagery and imagination theme
are both very good.
-I also like the idea of the
peonies blooming all four seasons.
-You have created a pleasant
atmosphere in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-The imagery and imagination theme
are both very good.
-I also like the idea of the
peonies blooming all four seasons.
-You have created a pleasant
atmosphere in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking my flight of fantasy!