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Comment from moongirlwriter
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What a nice poem. . .and a kindred relationship. When you find this kind of friendship early in life, there is lots of time for it grow. Poems don't always have to rhyme. . and this one makes perfect sense without every line rhyming.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
    HELLO MOONGIRLWRITER: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from 24chas
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I liked this piece, rhonnie69. I can definitely tell where your inspiration comes from, or rather who it comes from. I like the flow of this one and the emotion. Nice job.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
    HELLO 24CHAS, my brother: So you can definitely tell. "WHO," my inspiration comes from. Well...what can I say??? Except... "OH WOW!!! What an inspiration!!! Girl's spells works on boy's from time to time. Then stuff gets like this...now stuff happens. Ask Adam. Lovin' it. Thanx for chuckin' in a chuckle. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.