Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

This is a smartly written poem..a very lovely tribute to the female figure.

You acknowledge our importance ..we are stimulating ( you help me think) and a source of nourishment ( you helped me find a place to drink) for our counterpart's mind.

We are also a source of beauty love/ pleasure ...."jewel butterfly ".

You Appreciate and give merit to females and their various qualities/abilities.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019

HELLO TEMPESTE: In our Holy Bible in the book of: GENESIS, chapter 2: and at verse 18...our God said: "It is not good that man should be alone. I will make him a helper comparable to him." Now read verses, 21-22-&-23. You may know this already, Tempeste, my dear lady...but read it just to refresh it in your mind. God bless you and all of your kind. Cordially: rhonnie69.

reply by tempeste on 07-Mar-2019

Ciao Rhonnie !
I reread the verses and I understand what inspired you to write thoses words ...

but I do feel that firstly all our actions should come from the heart ..WE should want to do what's right as a principal and not because it is said in the bible.

and what about those that don't believe in God ? (it's very fansionable these days )...so they feel free to do as they please.

I think Buddha's teachings nailed it...our actions will determine if we will rise to the next level or continue to live in this world of torment.

Beliefs apart I enjoy reading your world rhonnie.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautiful tribute to the butterfly that graces the garden of flowers. It was a joy to read Your rhyming is natural and not forced.
Patricia

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a beautiful write filled with compassion and thoughtfulness. Keeping an open mind will infuse new ideas and fill your world with sweet things, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019