Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "I Am That I Am"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
6 total reviews
Comment from sfharper
Wow, each line sits powerfully all by itself like a command, to meet up to this inspirational challenge. I liked your explanation and choice of picture. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Wow, each line sits powerfully all by itself like a command, to meet up to this inspirational challenge. I liked your explanation and choice of picture. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement,
Comment from Shirley McLain
Wonderful Cinquain Poem. Good luck in the contest. The poem was concise, easy to read and it was most helpful that you put the definition to indefatigability because I had no idea what it was. Have a blessed day. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Wonderful Cinquain Poem. Good luck in the contest. The poem was concise, easy to read and it was most helpful that you put the definition to indefatigability because I had no idea what it was. Have a blessed day. Shirley
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review, God's Blessings to you.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a profound piece of spiritual writing and I appreciate your notes to further explain your thinking as you wrote it.
Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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This is a profound piece of spiritual writing and I appreciate your notes to further explain your thinking as you wrote it.
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments, God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A powerful write, so few words with firm foundations here, your belief is steady and honest, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your tower of strength here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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A powerful write, so few words with firm foundations here, your belief is steady and honest, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your tower of strength here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your time, the review and compliments. God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Tedd Turton
Sharp and most definitely to the point. The 2,4,6,8,2 format isn't easy, but you have given it good shape here. The final line was a perfect ending. Credence has that authority and strength to it I thought. Also, Great title.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Sharp and most definitely to the point. The 2,4,6,8,2 format isn't easy, but you have given it good shape here. The final line was a perfect ending. Credence has that authority and strength to it I thought. Also, Great title.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from 24chas
This was a nice piece, Gmartinez247. I think you really brought your message forth and clearly stated your belief and faith. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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This was a nice piece, Gmartinez247. I think you really brought your message forth and clearly stated your belief and faith. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement. Blessings to you.