I See No Point
Rondel Poetry contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from LyndaS
Dear poet. Must agree with you. I can't see a point either. Not well versed in poetry forms. This looks like they threw darts and came up with this one.
That being said.... Love your artwork here. With this picture I would have been drawn to this even if your poem sucked.
But damn......... you nailed it. Nice job. Funny as hell. I commend you on following the rules and coming up with a nice entry here.
Good luck in your contest. Well done. U P
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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Dear poet. Must agree with you. I can't see a point either. Not well versed in poetry forms. This looks like they threw darts and came up with this one.
That being said.... Love your artwork here. With this picture I would have been drawn to this even if your poem sucked.
But damn......... you nailed it. Nice job. Funny as hell. I commend you on following the rules and coming up with a nice entry here.
Good luck in your contest. Well done. U P
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, UP. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. Yeah, I think this pic I came across was hilarious. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.
Comment from gsuarez
I really enjoyed reading this piece, so very well conceived. I found the theme excellent. The choice words was spot on. Your rhyme and rhythm was also excellent. Then of course the video. Great job.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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I really enjoyed reading this piece, so very well conceived. I found the theme excellent. The choice words was spot on. Your rhyme and rhythm was also excellent. Then of course the video. Great job.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Wow, thank you for the great review and big sixer, gsuarez. I sure didn't plan on seeing one of those for this silly piece. Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. You made my day. Thank you again. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from jmshumate
You did well with this format in writing a good flowing poem. You describe the repetition of the repetition of the format, bringing humor to the reader. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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You did well with this format in writing a good flowing poem. You describe the repetition of the repetition of the format, bringing humor to the reader. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the great review, jms. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from sfharper
Lol, I find your sense of humor in this poem funny. Repetition does strike me that way sometimes. I love the choice of photo to indicate this is mind-boggling. However, you used the form well, to provide extra stress for the repeated lines and I found it enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Lol, I find your sense of humor in this poem funny. Repetition does strike me that way sometimes. I love the choice of photo to indicate this is mind-boggling. However, you used the form well, to provide extra stress for the repeated lines and I found it enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, sfh. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great rest of your weekend.
