Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I like this Rhonnie, a little different for you. Very unique and fresh. I enjoyed the use of dialogue to tell the story. A favorite of mine in both prose and poetry.
All my best to you and yours,
Sally :+)

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2019

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Two love unsure of what the really should do with each other she wants him but he is very unsure of how to really go about it without spoiling things they have together.Young love they call it.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019

HELLO COUNTRY RANCH WRITER: Thank you. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Dan McCurdy

Excellent

Awwwww! Dialogical poems (I seem to have made up a word) aren't always my favorite, just because so few people speak in poetical ways, but this seemed to be a real dynamic between the couple and it was absolutely lovely. Almost like JD is playing with RJ ala Inigo and Fezzik.

And now that I've had that thought, I have some fan fiction to go write.

Very well done!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Great descriptive scene structured paragraphs flowing through out the writing.
Good Luck if entered in a contest, Good submission.Thanks for Sharing your Gifts and insight.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019