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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Naaaah...Don't sweat it,Trish! :) :) Just glad to see your name in the message box again! :) Well-written cinquan to pop your head in and say 'HI'! :) ;) Hope to hear more from you soon ... take care and many blessings! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Naaaah...Don't sweat it,Trish! :) :) Just glad to see your name in the message box again! :) Well-written cinquan to pop your head in and say 'HI'! :) ;) Hope to hear more from you soon ... take care and many blessings! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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I have been blessed with better health test results than feared. I hope to review soon
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain. I am sorry to hear that you are not well, I hope you will feel better soon and have more time to join us here at FanStory. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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A very well-written Cinquain. I am sorry to hear that you are not well, I hope you will feel better soon and have more time to join us here at FanStory. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Sandra , God brought me through a very anxiety provoking evaluation of my symptoms. I?ve ?been there done that twice? already, so fear always lurks. Thank you for your kind concern and review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this poem. I see you have entered the cinquain poetry contest. Your presentation is greatly improved by the use of the colorful illustration and your manipulation of the text font, color, and size. Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for sharing this poem. I see you have entered the cinquain poetry contest. Your presentation is greatly improved by the use of the colorful illustration and your manipulation of the text font, color, and size. Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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A very nice review - thank you
Comment from 24chas
This was a bittersweet piece, Bucketlist. First and foremost, I hope you conquer your health challenges and come back soon. Secondly, it was a good read and appreciated. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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This was a bittersweet piece, Bucketlist. First and foremost, I hope you conquer your health challenges and come back soon. Secondly, it was a good read and appreciated. Good job.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Than you very much!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Bucket,
LOL - This is a really cute poem and contest entry. My suggestion is to delete some of the excess white space bow your text for a more balanced visual. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Hi Bucket,
LOL - This is a really cute poem and contest entry. My suggestion is to delete some of the excess white space bow your text for a more balanced visual. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thanks, great suggestion but impossible to implement However, larger type does help!
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
It's nice to hear from you again. This is a lovely little piece. The presentation is very cheerful.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Get better soon.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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It's nice to hear from you again. This is a lovely little piece. The presentation is very cheerful.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Get better soon.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thanks for your very kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Glad to see you are back Trisha! Looking forward to your new posts! I hope you've had a good holiday, it seems you haven't lost your touch here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Glad to see you are back Trisha! Looking forward to your new posts! I hope you've had a good holiday, it seems you haven't lost your touch here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you. I don?t consider health issues a holiday!,,,Thanks, Dolly
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I hope you?re okay Trisha, love Dolly x
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Have a surgeon?s appointment today
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Best of luck Trisha, my thoughts are with you x x x
Comment from Debbie Pope
I was so happy to see your note. I have been missing you. Sorry to hear about the health issues. You mentioned them before, but I did not know if the surgeries that you mentioned were recently past or upcoming. I will add you to my little prayer list. I like how you announced that you miss us. That is classy and a perfect cinquain. I will point out, as your reviewer:), that "really" has 3 syllables. I had to look it up. I'd do the re'lly thing or take out "much."
Can't wait to read more of your classy poems.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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I was so happy to see your note. I have been missing you. Sorry to hear about the health issues. You mentioned them before, but I did not know if the surgeries that you mentioned were recently past or upcoming. I will add you to my little prayer list. I like how you announced that you miss us. That is classy and a perfect cinquain. I will point out, as your reviewer:), that "really" has 3 syllables. I had to look it up. I'd do the re'lly thing or take out "much."
Can't wait to read more of your classy poems.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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In all my years I never saw or heard 3 syllables in really! Thanks, perfection!
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I had to look it up, but with my heavy southern drawl, I say it with three.
