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Comment from country ranch writer
Nice work up for this very caring poem of friendship and love that goes a long way. Very pretty picture of flowers and etc for this poem.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Nice work up for this very caring poem of friendship and love that goes a long way. Very pretty picture of flowers and etc for this poem.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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HELLO COUNTRY RANCH WRITER: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet rhyming bouquet accepted with thanks here Rhonnie, forgetme knots and roses adoringly blooming with pride, a joy to read, best wishes . . . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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A sweet rhyming bouquet accepted with thanks here Rhonnie, forgetme knots and roses adoringly blooming with pride, a joy to read, best wishes . . . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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HELLO J.D: Words cannot express how happy you have made me...and how much I appreciate your acceptance of my gift to you.You're welcome. Caring about you have made me realize that a gentleman should bring his girl friend flowers. I hadn't a clue as what kind I should bring. I just searched through a bunch of bunches of them. Then I chose the bunch that is at least half as pretty as you...held my breath...and presented them to you. If she accepts them I said to myself...then I can breathe again. Dolly, I know that this sounds incredible...but you are the first girl that I ever gave flowers. They weren't real...but other than in heart...we are so far apart. My best wishes? That next time they'll be real. I'll figure it out...but I'll need your help. I have to wait until after midnight. But I have something that I want say to you in my next letter to you. God bless you, Dolly. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from sfharper
Good use of rhyme, very convincing emotion. I like the opening gift and the entreaty that follows. The end seems specific too much to be anything but a very personal poem, but that works. To make it less personal, replace specific names with roles, so it would work for anyone. It's fine the way it is though. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Good use of rhyme, very convincing emotion. I like the opening gift and the entreaty that follows. The end seems specific too much to be anything but a very personal poem, but that works. To make it less personal, replace specific names with roles, so it would work for anyone. It's fine the way it is though. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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HELLO SFHAPER: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from patcelaw
With this poem the writer has shown the love for a lady, by the man. It is wonderfully worded and beautifully presented. Good job. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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With this poem the writer has shown the love for a lady, by the man. It is wonderfully worded and beautifully presented. Good job. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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HELLO PATCELAW: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless.Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, rhonnie69. I think you did a great job of capturing romance in this piece. Nice flow and I can feel the love. Nice job of writing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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This was a good read, rhonnie69. I think you did a great job of capturing romance in this piece. Nice flow and I can feel the love. Nice job of writing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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HELLO 24CHAS: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
