Golden Nostalgia
A Rondeau entry8 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
I love rondeaus and this one really touch my heart. It is beautifully written and touches areas that mean a lot to me. I envy those that can write poetry, especially those that seem to be difficult but a good poet makes them seem easy.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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I love rondeaus and this one really touch my heart. It is beautifully written and touches areas that mean a lot to me. I envy those that can write poetry, especially those that seem to be difficult but a good poet makes them seem easy.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Thank you for dropping in to read share your sentiments!
Comment from Miss Sherry
Your artwork melted my old heart. What a divine way to present your write. To remember days gone by so sweetly is beautiful. Thank you for writing out the form you are using, it helps those of trying to learn new things. The last part of the poem referring to obsolete is bittersweet and easy to relate to. Lovely job.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Your artwork melted my old heart. What a divine way to present your write. To remember days gone by so sweetly is beautiful. Thank you for writing out the form you are using, it helps those of trying to learn new things. The last part of the poem referring to obsolete is bittersweet and easy to relate to. Lovely job.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping in to read and review my nostalgic entry!
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You are so very welcome!
Comment from Earl Corp
I like the subject you used, nostalgia for the times of our youth is a popular thing anong us entering our golden years. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I like the subject you used, nostalgia for the times of our youth is a popular thing anong us entering our golden years. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping in to read and review my nostalgic entry!
Comment from JudyE
The loneliness and boredom are conveyed well here. I think as people age they long more and more for the 'good old days', depending on how good those days were I guess. I can't improve on your poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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The loneliness and boredom are conveyed well here. I think as people age they long more and more for the 'good old days', depending on how good those days were I guess. I can't improve on your poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping in to read and review my nostalgic entry!
Comment from Michele Harber
This is simultaneously charming, nostalgic, wistful and sad. I like the way you made the refrain seem organic to your verses and not forced, giving your poem a nice flow. Your rhymes are all very well chosen.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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This is simultaneously charming, nostalgic, wistful and sad. I like the way you made the refrain seem organic to your verses and not forced, giving your poem a nice flow. Your rhymes are all very well chosen.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping in to read and review my nostalgic entry!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from victor 66
I relate to the time of which you write. I feel that I had many good memories and overall, my childhood was good. Perhaps our memories of those times are little treasures that our minds let us recall when we are down to show us our lives were of value. Just a thought. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I relate to the time of which you write. I feel that I had many good memories and overall, my childhood was good. Perhaps our memories of those times are little treasures that our minds let us recall when we are down to show us our lives were of value. Just a thought. Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping in to read and review my nostalgic entry!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. Yes, memory lane is where I return quite often even now. I like your theme and your picture. Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for sharing. Yes, memory lane is where I return quite often even now. I like your theme and your picture. Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping in to read and review my nostalgic entry!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Mystery Author,
Very nicely written contest entry you have penned. This entry should be a contender. Best of luck.
Very nice visual presentation complements flawless verse perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Jan
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Hi Mystery Author,
Very nicely written contest entry you have penned. This entry should be a contender. Best of luck.
Very nice visual presentation complements flawless verse perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Jan
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping in to read and review my nostalgic entry!
