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Using contest rules, this is my first attempt.2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I think that you did a fine job with this post. I have never written a Pleiades Poem before, but it seems rather straightforward. You seemed to follow along with the sample, sort of tracing your steps on this cold day. That's always a good way to do it.
My biggest suggestion would be to change the font to white. As is, it is too hard to read. And, I would add a photo. Voters are spoiled and look for interesting photos. I'll be glad to help you do either of those presentation changes if you like.
We are glad to have you. I look forward to reading more of your posts.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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I think that you did a fine job with this post. I have never written a Pleiades Poem before, but it seems rather straightforward. You seemed to follow along with the sample, sort of tracing your steps on this cold day. That's always a good way to do it.
My biggest suggestion would be to change the font to white. As is, it is too hard to read. And, I would add a photo. Voters are spoiled and look for interesting photos. I'll be glad to help you do either of those presentation changes if you like.
We are glad to have you. I look forward to reading more of your posts.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Oh thank you so much for your suggestions, I do appreciate your input. I am always eager to learn new things and writing here on FanStory has been lots of fun for me thus far. I will be making those changes as I do feel it will help with reviews, etc.
Thanks again!
Comment from JudyE
I really enjoyed your poem and you've brought to mind some great memories. However I found the black print on the dark blue background really difficult to read. And I do mean REALLY. But perhaps it's just because I'm older. :(
The very best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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I really enjoyed your poem and you've brought to mind some great memories. However I found the black print on the dark blue background really difficult to read. And I do mean REALLY. But perhaps it's just because I'm older. :(
The very best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Yes, thank you. You are not the first to tell me this about the color, so I will be changing it very soon. I am having fun here on FanStory!