The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Different "Chochee Medina Life and Times
5 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You followed the directions
for the prompt well.
-I like the emphasis with
the '-d' sound in the poem.
-The ideas are very good,
and give interesting things
to think about:
"Dynamic by constant change and effectiveness."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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-Good artwork.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You followed the directions
for the prompt well.
-I like the emphasis with
the '-d' sound in the poem.
-The ideas are very good,
and give interesting things
to think about:
"Dynamic by constant change and effectiveness."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Pleiades Poetry contest.
You have managed the form and structure and told a story within.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Pleiades Poetry contest.
You have managed the form and structure and told a story within.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments
Comment from victor 66
Well, you have followed the directions for writing a Pleidades Poem to a "T". I would pronounce this poetic format, "play -dades" but I'm sure it's different than that. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Well, you have followed the directions for writing a Pleidades Poem to a "T". I would pronounce this poetic format, "play -dades" but I'm sure it's different than that. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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I originally thought it was pronounced Pleiades a star cluster known as the Seven Sisters and M45. LOL
Thank you for the review and compliments.
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Thank you as well for the explanation.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not familiar with the town and it certainly sounds very different! Great descriptions giving a sense of the extraordinary, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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I'm not familiar with the town and it certainly sounds very different! Great descriptions giving a sense of the extraordinary, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Birth place of 50' s Rock Star Richie Valens who died in a plane crash with Buddy Holly and the Big Bopper. Thank you for the review and compliments,
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I didn?t know that! Buddy Holly can from a small town too! Lubbock, both very talented and such a loss to the world, love Dolly x
Comment from Randa Dayle
Very good. I have never seen one of that type of poem before. Very interesting, and it look like you followed the rules! Good luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Very good. I have never seen one of that type of poem before. Very interesting, and it look like you followed the rules! Good luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement.