Manslaughter
the assassinations in America3 total reviews
Comment from gramalot8
This is a great poem with a great message. Well done within the parameters required for this contest. I so feel our world is getting scarier with so many senseless murders nowadays. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
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This is a great poem with a great message. Well done within the parameters required for this contest. I so feel our world is getting scarier with so many senseless murders nowadays. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon]
Good piece - very provocative, in a positive way. Sadly it is not a phenomenon limited to your country. Gun control or civilization: you can't have both.
I have not seen this 'form' before. Well done. There is perhaps an opportunity to increase your M's - maybe Go Big on the alliteration? Just a thought.
I wish you all the best in your contest.
cheers
phill
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Hello Anon]
Good piece - very provocative, in a positive way. Sadly it is not a phenomenon limited to your country. Gun control or civilization: you can't have both.
I have not seen this 'form' before. Well done. There is perhaps an opportunity to increase your M's - maybe Go Big on the alliteration? Just a thought.
I wish you all the best in your contest.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Killings take place all ove the world and in towns where you would never expect it to happen, we are shocked every time. Your words are chilling, love Dolly x
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Killings take place all ove the world and in towns where you would never expect it to happen, we are shocked every time. Your words are chilling, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019