Wonders
A contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I loved your Pleiades poem! I've never tried one.
I like the wonder and anticipation you put into the poem at the start of a new day. I especially liked "Whistle quietly to the birds,
Waiting for their reply." I talk back to the birds but I hope I didn't say anything bad. Lol.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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I loved your Pleiades poem! I've never tried one.
I like the wonder and anticipation you put into the poem at the start of a new day. I especially liked "Whistle quietly to the birds,
Waiting for their reply." I talk back to the birds but I hope I didn't say anything bad. Lol.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Good grief I had actually forgot about this one. Thank you so much Helen for reviewing and your great comments. Mmm I truly doubt that you would say anything bad. Hugs.
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Lol. My bird pronunciation is probably easy to misunderstand. 😊
Comment from BeasPeas
I enjoyed reading this poem. I agree with your thought from the beginning--"Wonderful is each day." Each one offers something unique if we have the openness to accept it. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I agree with your thought from the beginning--"Wonderful is each day." Each one offers something unique if we have the openness to accept it. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your kind comments and of course the good luck wishes.
Comment from geetha silvaratnam
Nicely done ! An artwork would have definitely complemented this poem. The wonders of life so beautifully explained in 7 lines. Good job! All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Nicely done ! An artwork would have definitely complemented this poem. The wonders of life so beautifully explained in 7 lines. Good job! All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. Your good luck wishes are greatly appreciate.
Comment from Dean Kuch
In the Pleiades Poem contest entry the sounds of "W" are definitely at the forefront.
It almost sounds in you poem as if spring has sprung.
I personally would like nothing better.
Nicely penned.
Good luck to you in the contests outcome.
~Dean
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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In the Pleiades Poem contest entry the sounds of "W" are definitely at the forefront.
It almost sounds in you poem as if spring has sprung.
I personally would like nothing better.
Nicely penned.
Good luck to you in the contests outcome.
~Dean
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. Your good luck wishes are greatly appreciate.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your acrostic is well-written and quite lovely--expressing those early-morning
thoughts about the just-begun day. The tone of the poem is positive, one of
expectation of the best.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Your acrostic is well-written and quite lovely--expressing those early-morning
thoughts about the just-begun day. The tone of the poem is positive, one of
expectation of the best.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Mystery Author,
This is a lovely scene you have painted for us with your lovely verse. Also, it is a great contest entry. Best of luck to you in the voting booth!
Nothing I can see here to suggest you consider improving upon.
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.
Jan
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Hi Mystery Author,
This is a lovely scene you have painted for us with your lovely verse. Also, it is a great contest entry. Best of luck to you in the voting booth!
Nothing I can see here to suggest you consider improving upon.
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.
Jan
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. The good luck wishes were appreciated.
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You are most welcome. My pleasure! Jan :-)
Comment from victor 66
Well, you have fulfilled the requirements for writing a Pleidades Poem. I may try giving one a shot if there are any open slots in the contest when I have one written. But, good luck to you.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Well, you have fulfilled the requirements for writing a Pleidades Poem. I may try giving one a shot if there are any open slots in the contest when I have one written. But, good luck to you.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. The good luck wishes were appreciated.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from QC Poet
Format fitting and charming poem great descriptive sentence structures short to the point, Good submission and Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Format fitting and charming poem great descriptive sentence structures short to the point, Good submission and Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. The good luck wishes were appreciated. Blessings
Comment from gramalot8
This is a great poem. Your words did a wonderful job with the requirements of the contest and still giving your readers a great message. I love the outdoors, the wind, the birds and wondering if rain will come. But being out in the rain can be fun too, right? ð??? Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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This is a great poem. Your words did a wonderful job with the requirements of the contest and still giving your readers a great message. I love the outdoors, the wind, the birds and wondering if rain will come. But being out in the rain can be fun too, right? ð??? Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. The good luck wishes were appreciated.
Comment from Malerie
"Wonders" Good title for your reflection of the many wonders. I like "watching the sun rise over the horizon, wishing for a day of beauty." These words paint vivid picture that the reader visionlize. Nice read, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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"Wonders" Good title for your reflection of the many wonders. I like "watching the sun rise over the horizon, wishing for a day of beauty." These words paint vivid picture that the reader visionlize. Nice read, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.