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Owe Deer! Hoo Gnu?!

Anne interruption wile righting a homonym poem

35 total reviews 
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Exceptional
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Simply a delightful and funny poem which I enjoyed. Originality and creativity abound. I cannot find anything to critique. Six stars (my first such rating). Excellent work!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
    WHOA!! Thank you, sweet Lance! This is a wonderful perk to my day. xo
Comment from Lordinajamjar
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Brilliant! You won. LOL

So pleased thst I voted for this. It was a very worthy winner. Hilariousy wicked and a fun read.

So well done.

All the best.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
    Eye no! Eye cooed knot believe eat!! Thank yew four yore sweet words of encouragement here, Lordinajamjar!! Very mush appreciated. xo
Comment from Bill Schott
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This homonym poem, Owe Deer! Hoo Gnu?, has the required word play and tells a bit of a story about this intruding deer and the eventual venison meal. Funny.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
    Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Joy Graham
Exceptional
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This is hilarious! Congratulations on winning first place. I was whining earlier that I was confused between homonyms and synonyms. Your poem makes it clear and now I'm quite sure I know.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
    Jest won moor service eye offer!! lol
    Thanks for you really nice review, Joy, and that sixth star, as well!! VERY much appreciated.
Comment from JudyE
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Bad/wrong spelling jumps out at me and I found this really hard to read!! Haha. You've done a wonderful job here. This is SOOO good. I hope you do well in the contest although I'm not sure this is what the judges will have in mind - or perhaps members are judging this one. Whatever - it's great.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
    Hahaha. You're too funny.
    I think this one's a member vote (have you voted?), so we'll have to stay tuned.

    Thanks for your feedback and encouragement, though. xo
Comment from Michele Harber
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Oh deer. Eye think I'm inn big, big, big, big treble. You're poem is grate. When eye said eye wanted strong competition, eye didn't mien this strong! Good luck inn the contest. If ewe ween, eats well deserved.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
    Yore keeling me, Woman...
reply by Michele Harber on 26-Feb-2019
    That's only fare, scents yore poem is keeling mine inn the competition - butt mower power to ewe. Ewe deserve eat.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
    HAHAHAHAH.
    Eye think ewe are ass adorable ass Life can bee. Ewe sleigh mee.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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You've done a superb job with this one. I like the clever wording. This was very well thought out. How long did it take for you to get it just right? Did it come to you in a flash? This is really good and very funny. This made me smile and I enjoyed reading it. Very well done!

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
    It surprisingly did not take all that long. But what was funny was that once I started with these homonyms, I spent the rest of the night making every word I typed into one! It made me so crazy I had to leave the computer and go play piano.

    Thank you for your very sweet and encouraging words here, Jeffrey. Eye dew appreciate them!! xo
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! That was hilarious and so well done. Just when I think you must be out of homonyns, you surprise me with me and end up with the dear deer not as a guest but as a stew.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
    Eye have know shame, Iyenochka!!
    Thanks for this nice review. I loved it. xo
Comment from Kerry Foley
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Hahaha, this is a fantastic homonym poem, you surely did a fabulous job with it.
A very fun and entertaing piece. Loved it! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
    Eye appreciate yore vote of kindness, Kerry! Thank ewe! xo
reply by Kerry Foley on 13-Mar-2019
    You're very welcome. So sorry for the late reply:))
Comment from June Sargent
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This is great! It made me chuckle with delight. Great imagery of a deer interrupting your project. Eye think ewe will dee well in the sight contest. Grate job!

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank ewe, June!! xo