Dreams of Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Shooting Stars"A word collage about my life.
5 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I so love her work and use it mostly all the time. This is very well done for the contest and I love the flow and the rhyming scheme you used to tell the story.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I so love her work and use it mostly all the time. This is very well done for the contest and I love the flow and the rhyming scheme you used to tell the story.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the review! I appreciate your reading and the comments!
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Gorgeous about Friendship fm I am sending my friend by as I don't have a six but maybe she will give you one on my behalf because I just read it to her and we both think it is absolutely stunning and I hope it wins the rhyming contest! Because it is an amazing poem! Good luck... Oops now wait, she is in it too shoot! Okay well just FYI this is definitely my VIRTUAL six!!! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Gorgeous about Friendship fm I am sending my friend by as I don't have a six but maybe she will give you one on my behalf because I just read it to her and we both think it is absolutely stunning and I hope it wins the rhyming contest! Because it is an amazing poem! Good luck... Oops now wait, she is in it too shoot! Okay well just FYI this is definitely my VIRTUAL six!!! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the wonderful comments, along with the best wishes ! Really do appreciate the virtual six!
Comment from patcelaw
I can remember as a child, sitting out on a warm summer's night watch the stars as the flew across the sky and the sight was a marvel to me
Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I can remember as a child, sitting out on a warm summer's night watch the stars as the flew across the sky and the sight was a marvel to me
Patricia
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and the stars!
Comment from Jennifer Carr
I love reading about stars and the way you compared stars to friends is so original FM Wright. Very beautifully written and the imagery is spot on with the shooting star and no trace left behind :)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I love reading about stars and the way you compared stars to friends is so original FM Wright. Very beautifully written and the imagery is spot on with the shooting star and no trace left behind :)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate the stars and the review!
Comment from Sugarray77
I like your rhyming verse that flows smoothly and eloquently about friendship and shooting stars. I enjoyed reading the good descriptive lines and phrases. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I like your rhyming verse that flows smoothly and eloquently about friendship and shooting stars. I enjoyed reading the good descriptive lines and phrases. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much! The stars and the review are greatly appreciated!