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Dreams of Reality

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Shooting Stars"
A word collage about my life.

5 total reviews 
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I so love her work and use it mostly all the time. This is very well done for the contest and I love the flow and the rhyming scheme you used to tell the story.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the stars and the review! I appreciate your reading and the comments!
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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Gorgeous about Friendship fm I am sending my friend by as I don't have a six but maybe she will give you one on my behalf because I just read it to her and we both think it is absolutely stunning and I hope it wins the rhyming contest! Because it is an amazing poem! Good luck... Oops now wait, she is in it too shoot! Okay well just FYI this is definitely my VIRTUAL six!!! Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the stars and the wonderful comments, along with the best wishes ! Really do appreciate the virtual six!
Comment from patcelaw
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I can remember as a child, sitting out on a warm summer's night watch the stars as the flew across the sky and the sight was a marvel to me
Patricia

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and the stars!
Comment from Jennifer Carr
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I love reading about stars and the way you compared stars to friends is so original FM Wright. Very beautifully written and the imagery is spot on with the shooting star and no trace left behind :)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate the stars and the review!
Comment from Sugarray77
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I like your rhyming verse that flows smoothly and eloquently about friendship and shooting stars. I enjoyed reading the good descriptive lines and phrases. Well done and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much! The stars and the review are greatly appreciated!