Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Very nice poem for all to see the work up for your poem is really nice, never give up and concentrate on your future ahead.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019

HELLO COUNTRY RANCH WRITER: Thank you. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Cass Carlton

Exceptional

I like this. It is on one hand a poem about the writer courting the moon. Ah! but is it? Do the words of the poem speak of a physical person? One who is unattainable, but adored from afar? The images in this piece are exquisite. A maiden in snow white garments sprinkles fairy dust on the moonlit scene. A tranquil lake where a white sailed boat drifts across starry reflected water. And the lover's promise to be ever present in the maiden's life and dreams. How beautiful! Well done cheers Cass

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Beautifully written in well rhymed couplets. Any girl would be delighted to have a suitor croon his poem to her. Patricia

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Well written love poem. I like the sprinkled starlight
Nocturnal air..the art work fits perfectly
I like a moon croon...true moon...great title
God bless

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019