Sudden Snowstorm
What do you do when a snowstorm suddenly hits?6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This tyburn, Sudden Snowstorm, has the proper formatting and makes the correlation between snow storms and the times in ditches.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This tyburn, Sudden Snowstorm, has the proper formatting and makes the correlation between snow storms and the times in ditches.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Yes, thank you for the stars and the insightful review!
Comment from sfharper
Good use of the form, you capture the setting as well as the effect on the narrator. Quite a good run of rhyme, it keeps the poem lighthearted. The action matches the title well. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Good use of the form, you capture the setting as well as the effect on the narrator. Quite a good run of rhyme, it keeps the poem lighthearted. The action matches the title well. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the stars and your encouraging comments!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What an awesome four-word choice in the beginning, very original (no more snow, please!! lol!) -- this is a great offering for the contest! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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What an awesome four-word choice in the beginning, very original (no more snow, please!! lol!) -- this is a great offering for the contest! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) ;)
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the rating, the review and the good wishes at the poll!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I am far too familiar with THIS situation not to appreciate how perfectly you have captured it with this poem (and photo, too.) Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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I am far too familiar with THIS situation not to appreciate how perfectly you have captured it with this poem (and photo, too.) Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you! your rating, review and good luck wishes are greatly appreciated!
Comment from Michele Harber
Oh dear. Been there, done that. This is a well-done Tyburn, with your initial four words being very descriptive, and then flowing neatly into the last two lines. I wish you luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Oh dear. Been there, done that. This is a well-done Tyburn, with your initial four words being very descriptive, and then flowing neatly into the last two lines. I wish you luck in the competition.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you! I really appreciate the stars, the review and the good luck wishes!
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My pleasure, on all counts.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :)
This is a very good entry for the contest.
Well presented and in good form.
We don't get proper snow over here very often, but when we do, we have no idea how to deal with it - the roads become gridlocked and the tow trucks are out in force!
Good Luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Hi :)
This is a very good entry for the contest.
Well presented and in good form.
We don't get proper snow over here very often, but when we do, we have no idea how to deal with it - the roads become gridlocked and the tow trucks are out in force!
Good Luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you for all the stars, the review and the wishes! We don't really here, either, though about 5 winters ago we got , with the drifts about 4 feet all at one time.
