God Speaks
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Comment from kiwijenny
Sometimes acrostics force the poem.
We innocently or deliberately make God responsible for or at our sufferings...responsible for or at our sufferings doesn't make sense. Leave out or at.
Sometimes you talk to the audience as in Talk to God, teach us His words today then you switch to we worship or pray to God for having peace in our lives...this is difficult to follow
But I praise you for glorifying God and constantly reminding us to look to Him.
God bless and thanks for that.
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Sometimes acrostics force the poem.
We innocently or deliberately make God responsible for or at our sufferings...responsible for or at our sufferings doesn't make sense. Leave out or at.
Sometimes you talk to the audience as in Talk to God, teach us His words today then you switch to we worship or pray to God for having peace in our lives...this is difficult to follow
But I praise you for glorifying God and constantly reminding us to look to Him.
God bless and thanks for that.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Alcrator Litt Dear. I can honestly say I've never seen a longer acrostic poem, which in and of itself is fine. You said what you wanted to say and did it in an acrostic way. Good for you.
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This was a good read, Alcrator Litt Dear. I can honestly say I've never seen a longer acrostic poem, which in and of itself is fine. You said what you wanted to say and did it in an acrostic way. Good for you.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If some of your lines were slightly shorter I feel this poem would read more like a poem and be more acrostic, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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If some of your lines were slightly shorter I feel this poem would read more like a poem and be more acrostic, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from gramalot8
This is beautifully written and a great Acrostic poem. You have definitely given us what seems to me to be a prayer requesting the Spirit to help in gaining a closer relationship with God. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing this with us.
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This is beautifully written and a great Acrostic poem. You have definitely given us what seems to me to be a prayer requesting the Spirit to help in gaining a closer relationship with God. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from QC Poet
Thank you for sharing this poem, the orb description was helpful to your written insightful message. The longer sentence structures and paragraphs slightly distracted the Acrostic words but I can discern them.
Good Luck in the contest if entered.
God's Blessings to you.
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Thank you for sharing this poem, the orb description was helpful to your written insightful message. The longer sentence structures and paragraphs slightly distracted the Acrostic words but I can discern them.
Good Luck in the contest if entered.
God's Blessings to you.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
