God Speaks
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Comment from dovemarie
Dear Alcreator, Wonderful poem about God and teaching us to know him with the words you used in each stanza. Beautiful acrostic words, I liked the alliteration in the last stanza, you are a very spiritual person, I can see. Dove Good luck in the contest
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Dear Alcreator, Wonderful poem about God and teaching us to know him with the words you used in each stanza. Beautiful acrostic words, I liked the alliteration in the last stanza, you are a very spiritual person, I can see. Dove Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
I like your very original way to do an Acrostic Poem.
I hope you don't mind if I make a suggestion with each letter from the title of your poem example-
with each letter of Talk change
t a l k with a lager font size or change the color
and do with the same with the rest of your title---
(With) (God), (Teach Us Today)
Best to you in this contest
Gert
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Hello author
I like your very original way to do an Acrostic Poem.
I hope you don't mind if I make a suggestion with each letter from the title of your poem example-
with each letter of Talk change
t a l k with a lager font size or change the color
and do with the same with the rest of your title---
(With) (God), (Teach Us Today)
Best to you in this contest
Gert
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from LIJ Red
An acrostic sermon, with some gems of wisdom...usually the man who shouts "God made me do it!" is as guilty as the one who howls "The Devil Made Me do it."
Excellent post.
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An acrostic sermon, with some gems of wisdom...usually the man who shouts "God made me do it!" is as guilty as the one who howls "The Devil Made Me do it."
Excellent post.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from mmonaghan777
A very well written acrostic poem. It is a challenge I hope to take on one day. I also love that you chose to let your thoughts flow without the constriction of punctuation.
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A very well written acrostic poem. It is a challenge I hope to take on one day. I also love that you chose to let your thoughts flow without the constriction of punctuation.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from JDRBAR
Al, your style is indeed unique. However, the thoughts behind your unusual wording is loud and clear and shows your underlying talent. It does fulfill the requirements and I like the content.
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Al, your style is indeed unique. However, the thoughts behind your unusual wording is loud and clear and shows your underlying talent. It does fulfill the requirements and I like the content.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem. The more we talk with God, the more we get at ease with Him and our talks become more and more easier over time, we make a point to speak to Him each day.
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A very well-written acrostic poem. The more we talk with God, the more we get at ease with Him and our talks become more and more easier over time, we make a point to speak to Him each day.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's hard to trust God sometimes. I've found myself struggling with it again the past week. Maybe this is what I needed to read this morning. God and I are getting better at the power struggle, I always want it, but it's hard. You did a great job with this.
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It's hard to trust God sometimes. I've found myself struggling with it again the past week. Maybe this is what I needed to read this morning. God and I are getting better at the power struggle, I always want it, but it's hard. You did a great job with this.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is another very well constructed acrostic poem, and as you say, written in your own style. As it should be. The subject matter is always appreciated, especially one that spells out the ways, wants and laws of God. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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This is another very well constructed acrostic poem, and as you say, written in your own style. As it should be. The subject matter is always appreciated, especially one that spells out the ways, wants and laws of God. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from nomi338
Your well written poem brings to mind a much bigger issue. That is the misconceptions about God and exactly who is the cause of the trouble present in the world today? The answer is pretty clear, after Satan the devil's deception led to Adam and Eve's sin, the question arose can man effectively think for and govern himself or does he ultimately need God. Satan's assertion was that man could, so God withdrew and decided that he would only intervene when man approached him and asked for his help. Otherwise man was pretty much on his own. What man did not know was that with God pretty much out of the picture, mankind was fodder for all of the devil's evil plans for the destruction of man. God loves man and Satan hates what God loves.
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Your well written poem brings to mind a much bigger issue. That is the misconceptions about God and exactly who is the cause of the trouble present in the world today? The answer is pretty clear, after Satan the devil's deception led to Adam and Eve's sin, the question arose can man effectively think for and govern himself or does he ultimately need God. Satan's assertion was that man could, so God withdrew and decided that he would only intervene when man approached him and asked for his help. Otherwise man was pretty much on his own. What man did not know was that with God pretty much out of the picture, mankind was fodder for all of the devil's evil plans for the destruction of man. God loves man and Satan hates what God loves.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from Cedar
This one carries a great message to your readers. A poem this long evidently took a great deal of thought and time.
I wish you good luck in the contest...Bill
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This one carries a great message to your readers. A poem this long evidently took a great deal of thought and time.
I wish you good luck in the contest...Bill
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
