Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Spider on a Wall"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Bobby Jo
among the the thought that we are almost in to Halloween, this hits the spot, and well deserves a six. So true when you think of spider, sitting on the wall. My mom use to say, I wish I was a little bug sitting on so and so's wall. So I know what strings they are pulling. ha ha, it works both ways.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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among the the thought that we are almost in to Halloween, this hits the spot, and well deserves a six. So true when you think of spider, sitting on the wall. My mom use to say, I wish I was a little bug sitting on so and so's wall. So I know what strings they are pulling. ha ha, it works both ways.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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An amazing rate, you gave this write. I'm blown, away! Glad, efforts were pleasing to you. Thanking you: for all.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem chapter. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent poem chapter. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Mighty powerful words, partner, hanging my head. Pleased, certain aspects of this write, were found appealing to your interests Thanking you for generous rate: and welcomed comment.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Another meandering write that seems to bring the reader through an emotional exercise of lessons learned through hard work and exertion. Thank you for sharing the challenge of you! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Another meandering write that seems to bring the reader through an emotional exercise of lessons learned through hard work and exertion. Thank you for sharing the challenge of you! ;) ;)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Glad aspects in this write were found appealing, thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, TPAC. I like the flow of it and the imagery you used was thoughtful as well. This was food for thought. Nice job and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, TPAC. I like the flow of it and the imagery you used was thoughtful as well. This was food for thought. Nice job and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Glad this particular write found interests to you, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
